Thursday, September 14

Room 367

Arrived at the hotel. She has a great smile. Hello how may I help you sir? You're in room 367 and here are the keys, enjoy your stay sir. Took the lift upstairs. A room quite pleasant. Hello reception I need help, my doors don't open and I'm locked inside! Hello Hello is anyone there? No one on the other side of the phone. Looking outside the window. Giant wild trees in darkness wanting to bury the loneliness, swaying to the breeze. Raindrops fall and they seem to hum a sad story of a long lost girl. A creaking sound of a door opening. I suddenly notice a side-door that leads to the balcony. Through the half-opened door I see a young girl in the balcony standing and staring into the deep night. Long black hair that reached her hips. Eyes that spoke volumes with tears dancing. Hands slender and pale. Wearing a white veil but jeans on. She seems to be in despair. Holding a letter in her hands. Suddenly she turns towards my way. Comes running to the door with her arms stretching out towards me! I shut the door so hard. Trapped inside in sheer terror. Who is she. I look again through the keyhole. Yes she is that same stewardess! The beauty who lead me here and trapped me in? What is she doing here. I shiver in fear. I open the bedside drawer. A newspaper article that reads 'Permanent Guest In Room 367'. I faint in shock. Wake up in about 2mins. And she's sitting on my bed! I run to the door. She laughs so loud. I try to open the door and it finally opens. I go down the corridor and reach the lifts. The lift doors opens and she is in there making loud sobs! I run back to the stairs and arrive at the desk somehow. Thank God, I wanna go home now. The same stewardess is there again?? She looks up and says with a smile 'I'm sorry sir checking out is prohibited - you can never leave'.

Guys this is just a short story I wrote partly using a real story that happened in a haunted hotel in Queensland. A chambermaid who committed suicide (out of a lost love) seems to haunt that hotel and seems to want to mingle with the guests. I don't know how true it is, but alot of people have seen her and was a pretty famous story. Apparently she's still around. Anyways I never really believed in ghosts until I really saw one in an apartment I once rented. I have blogged about it before, if interested read here. Any spooky stories to share?

Concert Update: With all your words of great encouragement and my $80 that should not be wasted at all (considering that so many kids are hungry in Ethiopia), I'm going to the concert, yes! Thanks guys for the advice MWAH! It's on tomorrow night and it's a combination of Salsa and Rock n Roll music with dinner and dance. I'm going to dance alright...to forget alot of things in my life. Yes I'm going to have fun and I will make sure I wear the sexiest outfit tomorrow...my black halter-neck top and long black skirt. This little go-getter kitten is close to what my spirits will be like tomorrow - it's raining men, hallelujah!

Now check out this LIVE version of one of my fav songs ever. Hotel California. It also kind of goes with my post so here it is. And hey have a good one folks!

Current Music: Hotel California by Eagles

104 comments:

  1. :) Nice story...
    I never miss out an opprotunity to see haunted places, there is a unique charm abt such places...

    my black halter-neck top and long black skirt.****Droooooooooooools

    Have a great great weekend and keep us posted abt the number of casualty.....lols

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  2. Wow Keshi!
    You can write so well!
    I really liked that short story you wrote!
    Spooky though!
    I do not have any spooky stories to share!

    Dancing Queen... you have as absolute ball tomorrow night!
    You will be the prettiest, sexiest
    girl in the whole joint!
    (and, I get to dog-sit all weekend
    I do love dogs, but I would prefer
    to be there with you tomorrow
    night dancing the night away
    if you think of it.. do a
    dance for me.)

    Love this song too!
    Have a wonderful weekend Keshi!
    You have been sad the last few...
    so, on this one just be totally
    happy!
    Forget all your cares!

    Huggggz my dear Keshi!

    -Margie

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  3. Compared to what we ought to be, we are only half awake. We are making use of only a small part of our physical and mental resources.

    Stating the thing broadly, the human individual thus lives far within his limits. He possesses power of various sorts which he habitually fails to use.



    William James

    (1842-1910, author)

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  4. The Booker prize
    if dis is not plagiarized shit

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  5. Why do u wanna scare me when I am alone:-))) Just kidding... Did you have any real experiences keshi..

    I love that kitty. Beyonce is coming up here too. I am yet to decide if I have to go.

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  6. Girl it is on, at four o' clock in di morn'
    An I been watchin' you shake dat ting
    Man dem a try, dem a get deny
    Caw I'm gonna tek dat ting
    Girl it is mine, a long time me a line
    An pan we fi waan you to shake dat ting
    Gyal dem a round an
    Dem a try tek yuh crown
    A nuff a dem just, ain't nothing

    [Verse]
    Dat ting a weh yuh got dey
    Weh yuh get it from, a mus yuh mama
    Do you fault dey, from me like a champion a bubble pon di
    Chart dey, gyal a look yuh hav me
    A we waan to slap dey from di front an to di back dey
    From di bed an to di matinee,
    We haffi blow, pull out di guns an pop pop
    It's dey fault dey, energy dey dey a so dey gimme di buff
    An look pon me, baby put it on me
    Right a now yuh mek di Dutty dap a feel horny

    [Chorus]
    Girl it is on, at four o' clock in di morn'
    An I been watchin' you shake dat ting
    Man dem a try, dem a get deny
    Caw I'm gonna tek dat ting
    Girl it is mine, a long time me a line
    An pan we fi waan you to shake dat ting
    Gyal dem a round an
    Dem a try tek yuh crown
    A nuff a dem just, ain't nothing

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  7. Keshieeeeeeeeeee

    Girl dont ever marry
    u belong to all


    but do have children with a man with good genes

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  8. When I wake up in the mornin' light
    I pull on my jeans and I feel all right
    I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on
    I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on hello

    It's the weekend, and I know that you're free hello
    So pull on your jeans and come on out with me hello
    Oh 'cause I need to have you near me,
    I need to feel you close to me
    I need to have you near me, I need to feel you close to me hello

    You and me, we'll go motorbike ridin' in the sun
    And the wind and the rain
    I got money in my pocket, I got a tiger in my tank
    And I'm king of the road again

    I'll meet ya in the usual place
    You don't need a thing except your pretty face, alright
    I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on
    I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on
    Aw, here we go mama

    You and me, we'll go motorbike ridin' in the sun
    And the wind and the rain
    I got money in my pocket, I got a tiger in my tank
    And I'm king of the road again

    When I wake up in the mornin' light
    I pull on my jeans and I feel all right
    Hey I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on

    I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on
    I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on
    I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on



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  9. Wow.. well written :-)
    I had goosebumps on my neck!
    You should have acted in Sixth Sense :D

    Phew.. so you finally decided to go to the concert. I knew you would :p Go get em girl :) All the men are out there.... and dont come back along :)
    LOL. Take care and enjoy the concert.
    air hugs to you....
    -ari

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  10. Ori



    u been outclassed
    hehehehehe

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  11. Correction.
    *dont come back alone :)

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  12. I have plenty of stories, all ghostly in fact. From the days of working in a nursing home that is situated in a 3 tiered mansion from the early 1900's...to the hospitalk I work in when buzzers go off at the desk and when we get there the patient is asleep!!
    HAve a great time when you go out, I can't wait to get into nice sexy things when my weight is all gone..a few months time I estimate.
    That song is one of my favourites of all time...for sure :)

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  13. "Wearing a white veil but jeans on" is hillarious in between the haunted or wht ever place...Hahah...Nice story lady..All the best for the nite...Guess I am late for tht :)

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  14. Cazzie!!!


    u drive dis old man Crazyyy

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  15. nice story :).... wow good.. so are going to make to party!.. dance as if you will never dance again :)...

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  16. wow tht reeked spook... *shudder* .. i always hate watching these little girl/boy horror movies.. they just seem so real..
    and hey am happy ur goin to tht concert... outfit sounds super hot.. hope ur accessorising it with super long earrings.. hehe i have a earring fetish amongst many others.. :) and shoessssss of course.. i'd give my life for a well deserved pair!! lol.. okok.. well look ur best .. the band can step aside coz ur going to be the rockstaaaa!! :))

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  17. Even though I left school 25 yrs ago.. I still get "nightmares" of being late to school / a difficult mathematics paper !!
    I am usually not the "fear of unknown" types..

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  18. I beleive in ghost and I have seen real spooky life of 2 years of such hoorible things which I don't want to remind myself et al.

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  19. Whoaaaa that was some fiction...enjoyed it each bit!!
    Heyyy chilll out for the nite...have fun n enjoiiii...life is great!
    Love tis song!

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  20. Keshi, you're such a great writer! Maybe you'll share some more with us. You will right?

    Enjoy the concert. Enjoy the food.

    Rock the skirt. Find a guy. Dance. Have a great evening.

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  21. Ghosts!

    I was going home with a friend two nights back with a friend and he saw me walking through this part of the place where he worked and asked why did i go there. it was dark and he started tellin me creepy tales. its freaked out cause i was at the zone where the ghost dwelled supposedly. and he went on with ghost tales all through the night. abit freaky ya...LOL..but i told him in the end i hear alot but i dun see one. maybe felt one ..but see...>> i am not sure..

    and heyz...enjoy the concert...Sure it would be FUN!!

    HAPPY WEEKEND to dA Lovely one! *hugs!

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  22. The biggest proof of ghosts do exist is me! hahaha.

    They r just torubled spirits present in a different dimensions.. and ppl do see them coz.. they have trouble to let go what they have already lost! Their life! The do become visible when the try to come back to this dimension, because they have trouble in letting it go!

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  23. bhooooooooooooo
    hehe its so spooky... i can give ur name to Ramsay he needs some good spooky writer

    n i wanna know how many guys fainted looking at ya in that sexyyy outfit..:D

    hey thats my FAVVVVVVVVVVV no.

    Hotel California.. wooo hooo :D

    muahhhh

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  24. Oh I love dancin! Have a blast and dance like no one is watching..

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  25. my god! not ghost stories! pliss! hehee...I sleep alone u see! yea, I believe that ghosts and spirits do exist...about my exp...hmn, not that I ahve seen anything or encountered any apparition as such...but I still feel like they are all around us! okay, that is it! I am not talkin about ghosts any more!

    and yo girl! that's the spirit! go put on the sexiest dress and knock those guys out!:) heheh...I was supposed to attend my frnds salsa competition but I couldn't go coz of the fever nd all!but then I was so regrettin!:( I am glad u are goin!!
    and hotel california is one of my fav too:)

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  26. nows thats something hair raising!!! good story!! and if its for real.. even better!!

    hey a good accompanied song - hotel california!!

    "you can check out anytime you like, but you can ne'ver leave!"

    ;-))

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  27. Photo in your "sexiest outfit" awaited by all your blog readers !!

    [:-P]Dp put one (or preferrably more) up soon.

    -PeAcE
    --WiTh
    ---GuNs

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  28. hi! the kitten is very cute and inteligent. It can stand.I like kittens too. I think you may not belive what i say but it is true. It up to you you belive a not. Now... i have more than 30 kittens and cat in my house

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  29. Keshi,

    I had goose-bumps on reading that!

    Have a nice weekend and have a blast.

    Take Care.

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  30. i was thinking of exactly d same song while reading ur post....n there it was

    i love this one by eagles...apart frm obviously desperado ;)

    n halter top n skirt....oh boy am i waiting for d pic now....ummmm

    *evil grin n thoughts....bad boy desperado*

    lol...take care n have a blast dear

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  31. You're such a good writer, Keshi! Really enjoyed your story ;)

    Of course I believe in ghosts. They are everywhere.

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  32. Hey KAP...
    i do believe in spirits and all... but no encounter as such... i guess the spirits will get a heart-attack when they see me... so i guess they are being on the safe side... lol :P

    Enjoy weekend and keep up the spirit.

    Ahem... i hope we get some mushy-mushy stories next.... after the rocky concert... *wink*

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  33. another quatre-quatre obsessive?

    have a lot of fun but b back b4 8

    m

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  34. One of the best ghost stories in the world:

    A man sat on a night train reading a book of ghost stories. Next to him, an old man saw what he was reading and leant over. "Excuse me sir, but do you believe in ghosts?", he asked. The first man said disdainfully "No!". The old man looked at him seriously. "I do", he said and disappeared.

    :P Chilled me to the bones that one

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  35. Ouch... I feeel spoookeyyy because I get similar story when i listen to hotel california!!!

    :)

    I am coming to Sydney btw :).

    Arun

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  36. Nice story.. scary also. But I have never seen a ghost so no comments if I believe in them or no. But yea being stuck with a ghost is not funny, unless she happens to be Reese Weatherspoon ;). Have fun at the concert.

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  37. actually had seen a film on the same lines,,,,,

    it goes like this......a smoker enters a hotel,,,run by only a single man.......the hotel is strictly a NO SMOKING ZONE.....!

    so if any smoker enters the hotel......he can leave the hotel only after he has given his habit of smoking....!

    has more in it....>!,,,

    very well written post...!

    cheers.....keshi...!

    ankit,

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  38. though I am not a fan of horror movies and stories I liked your narration skills :-)

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  39. You can check out anytime you like, but u can never leave!!
    Beautiful !

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  40. well constructed story...u should write a full version...with blood and all. :D

    U saw a ghost before! dang! man...now Im scared.

    //black dress...im imagining stuff rite now...but it isnt exactly raining women here...sad sad sad.

    Have a wonderful great weekend!

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  41. that is a great song...
    nice short story had me intrigued .. i dunno wat i would do if i encountered a ghost... will chk out that spooky story ..
    havent encountered one yet...
    enjoy the concert

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  42. Keshi-The original Stroy Teller....LOLz

    Nicely written......got me glued till the end....

    And Best of luck for the nite :)

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  43. Although I do not believe in GHOSTS...I do believe in the unpredictable power of the human brain...which can easily 'fool' it's owner with hallucinatory mischief.

    Sometimes these are instigated pharmacologically (Wo Dude pppphhhhhttt cough cough did you see that?) and sometimes apparitions can arise from that cranial stew of angst, repressed memories and personal phobias, the subconscious.

    One cannot discount the power of suggestion, mesmerism and mass hysteria to induce spectres from the darkside...

    BOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!OH!

    Even though I don't believe in ghosts I would never EVER stay in a 'haunted' setting because I do not trust my subcon!..or pranksters who were there to ensure a visit from a poltergeist (noisy ghost) NOT FUNNY!

    I would need to bring about 10 pair of underwear to make it through 1 night in a haunted hotel.

    BOOOOOOOO! AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH..oh not again!!

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  44. poetry ... now story writing ... whatz turning u on?

    ** Anyways I never really believed in ghosts until I really saw one in an apartment I once rented.

    I don't @ least as yet ;)

    ** it's a combination of Salsa and Rock n Roll music with dinner and dance

    u missed out keshi on the menu :D

    ** I will make sure I wear the sexiest outfit tomorrow

    wearning nuthing is the sexiest :p

    wowzer kitten's gettin groovy :D ... hav a gr8 weekend squirt

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  45. have fun in the concert and don't forget to post some pictures with your sexiest outfit :-)

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  46. hey keshi , I never thought as a story. looked so real. came back old haunted adventorous trips that i had made.
    hey nice ur goin in the concert.
    do write smthin abt it in ur next post. and may be sm more stories from ur side.

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  47. very nice blog... it relaxed me... u write very well...
    take care and have a great dancing weekend ahead..

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  48. a very nice blog... it relaxed me... nice to know u.. have a great weekend and keep on writing the same way..

    tc

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  49. hey sorry for multiple comments did not realise tht u approve the comments...so wrote the words of appreciation again..

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  50. neat short story. you wouldn't remember (FAR too young) but kinda reminds me of EC comics of the 50's with that horror sting in the tail.

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  51. Hmmm...I like this story. Ghost stories always take hold of me. I've seen ghosts and experienced some pretty creepy things in my life, so its good to read other people's stories, too (even if they are sometimes taken from fiction).

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  52. Keshi, reading your haunted story, for a minute I thought you went to the deep end! Girl! Wat u trying to do to me??!! Phew!! Enough horror in my life as it is, not going to start a new one..

    Girl is going to get her groove on!!SWEET!! That's more like it :)Have fun! OOOHHH! Mango cobbler did it!OK blame it on me now!!

    Check my blog on next friday, Harry scary will be waiting to scare the heck out of you ;)

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  53. I dont really care for haunted type stories..but this one is nice.
    enjoy the dancing..:)

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  54. oooh! what an eeerie Imagination , started to get a few goosebumps.keshi, your story has a potential to turn into a classic .Any plans of writing a Book...BTW, Have a great Time at the concert...:)

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  55. I do believe in ghosts...I remember as a child in the house where I lived. It was a house built in the early 1800's and I remember in this one bedroom seeing a figure sitting at this little table in the room that my brother slept.
    I wasn't fearful.

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  56. brrrrrr....have you seen this movie called hostel...if you have'nt....dont!!! Hotel california was my fav....it has been so overplayed now.

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  57. thats quite a story..

    i felt the goosebumps all around me.

    spooky,spooky,spooky...

    i have some spooky stories,too.
    (i better blog it out?)

    You wrote it well,Keshi,and its really effective!

    btw,i love your background music and its nice that u r gonna go to concert :)

    enjoy yourself,babe!

    ghee

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  58. hmm sometime its nice to evolve that canine insdie this humanity .
    relish the Rain ..
    dont get drenched .. men are not easy to get drenched with .

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  59. ennakum peiyikum rombe thooram achi ippo ellam :p

    =ammu=

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  60. Ghost, I believe in them lil'bit but haven't personally encountered them yet ;)

    How did your concert go?

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  61. Hi Keshi ... very well written! ... really spooky!

    well, i don't think there are ghosts ... but there are spirits ... so guess thats what you encountered ...

    anyways, rather not get into that discussion ... :)

    Have a gr8 weekend buddy!!!

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  62. cool spooky story keshi!
    and i love that song you got playing on your page!
    i'm glad you're going to the concert.

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  63. i am just an old old man
    in love







    with young young girls with beeg beeg boobs

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  64. Lovely story and great setting!

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  65. That was really spooky! But I kind of like ghost stories.

    Check my blog. You've been tagged.

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  66. ewwww...tht was spooky!
    n im alone at home...:(
    such posts should come wth a warning keshi ...brrr!!!

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  67. k00kie... oh my my someones partying hard... oh i had a wonderful nite out yest... went dancing too... was real fun.. sigh.. im already missing last nite :p

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  68. Interesting story. :-) And hey, Hotel California is my most fav rock song!

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  69. Vivid realism ! Almost thought you were in trouble !

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  70. That was a really nice story you wrote.scared me. I believe there are lost souls walking around.Heard lots of ghost stories.I will write a post some time on a real life experience I had.It is really scary.

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  71. gud one :)
    I guess i missed a few gud posts :P

    "I'm going to the concert, yes!"

    YESs...thaz liek it :D

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  72. How are we doing today...:)

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  73. Thats a nice story. I love watching and reading horror stories. I dont beleive in ghosts. But the story was very nice. I know I am late. Great post keshi :)

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  74. heyyyyyyyyy

    Keshi
    u forgot sumting didnt u ?

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  75. Don't fear us like this keshi, by telling ghost stories:)) Very nice story, i dont hope their is ghost.

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  76. heyy mate!

    what a scary story!
    really spooky if one read it at night as i did .
    you should write more stories.

    btw never seen a ghost myself. next time you see one ask him or preferably her, to give me a visit. :-)
    we have some kind of a need to make ourselves scared don't you think?

    will now read the next post.

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  77. ~~Southpaw

    **there is a unique charm abt such places...

    thats so true. Some strange peace and charm...

    dun drool lol!







    ~~Samuru999

    **Dancing Queen... you have as absolute ball tomorrow night!

    that I did Margie HUGGGGGGGGGZ! See ur lovely energy came and reached me across the miles and I did have a fantastic time...tnxxx babez! But I wish u all were with me too...I really did.







    ~~Saby

    **Girl dont ever marry
    u belong to all

    lol ok :)








    ~~Jim


    :) Nice.




    Keshi.

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  78. ~~Ari4u

    tnxxx Ari I did have a fantastic time :) but I did come back alone lol!








    ~~Cazzie

    **to the hospitalk I work in when buzzers go off at the desk and when we get there the patient is asleep!!

    omg thats freaky!

    yep dressing up really lifts the spirits up too. I hope u get to do that soon and dazzle away in style Caz ;-)







    ~~Scribblez_To_Wakeup

    **"Wearing a white veil but jeans on"

    LOL yeah :) TY Scribblez!







    ~~Sujit

    **dance as if you will never dance again

    hell I did :):) ty Sujit for ur advice n everything HUGGGGGGGZ!


    Keshi.

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  79. ~~S0ulAsylum

    yeah lil girl boy horrors r sooooo scary! Have u seen Child Play?

    **i have a earring fetish amongst many others.. :)

    OMG I'd die for ear-rings lol!


    **the band can step aside coz ur going to be the rockstaaaa!!

    hahaha they sure did cos I was on stage :):) tnxxx for that genuine wish sweety - it happened HUGGGGGGZ!








    ~~Parag

    lol @math!

    **I am usually not the "fear of unknown" types

    hey thats great...Im a bit scared of ghosts...but I guess they can be friendly who knows. Cos Im a friendly girl and I can make friends with anyone :):)







    ~~Tarun

    ur serious Tarun? eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerieeeeeee!!




    Keshi.

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  80. ~~Seema

    tnxxx sweety!







    ~~Fleiger

    **A ghost at hotel reminds me of "The Shining" by Stephen King. Have you read it?

    I have!!

    Belly-dancing wud be nice...but that wud be a Arabic/Turkish event and I have been to one with my best friend...she's a Turkish girl. So exotic those moves!! Luv it.


    I promised Niki that that will be my next post :) Fingers crossed.








    ~~AnonymousBlogger

    Rocked the skirt indeed ;-) tnxxxx matey!


    Keshi.

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  81. ~~Jewel_Rays

    Amyyyyy!

    **but i told him in the end i hear alot but i dun see one

    hehe...I guess only few ppl see em. ppl who have the 6th sense well-tuned. And its such ppl who turn out to be psychics etc.

    tnxxx girl I sure did have loadsa fun!









    ~~Kautilya

    ur a cute ghost then lol!

    **They r just torubled spirits present in a different dimensions

    I believe in that too. And it's ppl with the 6th sense (extra-sensitive) who can see/feel/hear em. Im a very sensitive person...too sensitive actually. And that explains why I may have seen that ghost that day. Yes, they r troubled souls who cant seem to let go of their past.








    ~~Mehak

    They sang Hotel Calfornia that nite woooohoooo!

    tnxxx :)







    ~~Uttara

    lol who's Ramsay?

    no one fainted but there were so many dudes dancing ard me...gosh some were a bit annoying cos they were staring...WTH! :):)




    Keshi.

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  82. ~~Pallavi

    I really did dance like no one is watching...I had sooo much fun and I was sooooo free. ty sweety!








    ~~Yashita

    aww Yash ur scared? Im so sorry. Hugggggggz!

    btw u know to Salsa? WOWWWWW! Hey they did salsa numbers too on Sat nite.








    ~~whatever_you're

    hey WC!

    **whenever i hear this song i always imagine myself driving a car along those america's highway road...

    'On a dark desert highway..cool wind in my hair...'

    so says it :)








    ~~Deepsat

    aha aha :) ty Deep!








    ~~Guns

    Wish granted in my latest post sir ;-)








    ~~Rain

    WC Rain n ty!


    ** have more than 30 kittens and cat in my house

    LOL really? well its cool :) I had 13 cats n kittens at one stage...and 3 dogs...when I was like 8yrs old.








    ~~Nikita

    :) tnxx Niki huggggggz!








    ~~Desperado

    hey I was listening to Desperado this morning n was thinking of ya...awwww :)

    did u choose this Id cos of that song?

    ur a bad boy? hell na :):)








    ~~Die_Murane

    have u seen one?







    ~~Eclipsed_Thoughts

    **i guess the spirits will get a heart-attack when they see me

    LOL cmon! I guess that female ghost came to see me that day cos she needed some make-up tips :):)

    btw no mushy stories but there was one guy giving me looks from across the table...I just had some fun with him LOL!








    ~~Anonimply

    huh be bakk b4 8? lol!








    ~~Kathy

    mwahhhhhhhh! awww dun be scared of ghosts cos the one who's going to be in ur room will be a hunky ghost like u said...rofl! Ghost of Elvis or something ;-)

    I had tons of fun Kath but I really was thinking of u, Uttsy, Ish and all my blog friends here...how much fun wud that be!








    ~~Silvara

    **The old man looked at him seriously. "I do", he said and disappeared.

    Silvara that really froze me in fear. Goshhhhhhhhh was very scary!!!!



    Keshi.

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  83. ~~Mr.Maverick

    ** I get similar story when i listen to hotel california!!!

    yes me too!

    ur comin to Syd? WHEN??????????








    ~~Akshay

    **being stuck with a ghost is not funny, unless she happens to be Reese Weatherspoon

    LOL! Well I dun mind being stuck with Elvis' or Kurt Cobain's ghost ;-)








    ~~Ankit

    ty Ankit :) That story sounds interesting...but how can it be a ghost story?








    ~~Syam

    ty Syam :)








    ~~Ramya

    WC Ramya!

    yes u can never leave.....! :)








    ~~Ghost_Particle

    Ghosty!! :)

    **blood and all

    Somehow I think when a ghost story is associated with blood, it becomes less effective. I dunno why but I feel that way.

    aww it's not raining women there? Well what abt snowing women then? :):)








    ~~Aditi

    I just froze when I saw that apparition...I can still rem her so clearly.








    ~~Coolvir

    lol so Im a story-teller? gooood!








    ~~Alex

    :) tnxxx!









    ~~Homo_escapeons

    hey great comment mate ty!

    **I do believe in the unpredictable power of the human brain...which can easily 'fool' it's owner with hallucinatory mischief.

    ok I agree but how do we even know that it's the brain that's fooling us or that it's really something external?


    **sometimes apparitions can arise from that cranial stew of angst, repressed memories and personal phobias, the subconscious.

    that can happen yes. but even then is there proof? This is the unknown and we fear to believe in the unknown. And majority of us cant and wont see spirits. But few ppl who have their 6th sense fine-tuned may be able to see em?


    **I would never EVER stay in a 'haunted' setting because I do not trust my subcon

    yes but whats that fear then? If we r so sure it's our subconscious, wy do we fear?


    **I would need to bring about 10 pair of underwear to make it through 1 night in a haunted hotel

    LOL hahahaha!








    ~~Samy

    **u missed out keshi on the menu

    LOL omg ur a crazy kitten now :):)

    Wearing nuttin? LOL where d u think Im going to on Sat nite - the shower?

    tnxxx Samy! :):)







    ~~AmitSinha

    ty Amit :)


    Keshi.

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  84. ~~Journeyman

    WC Journeyman n tnxxx! No probs there abt the comment repition :) ty for visiting.








    ~~Cocaine_Jesus

    tnxx mate :)

    **reminds me of EC comics of the 50's with that horror sting in the tail.

    I wasnt born then :(







    ~~Deborah

    G'day Deb!

    ** I've seen ghosts and experienced some pretty creepy things in my life,

    really??? Tell us na.








    ~~Foodies'_Hope

    lol did I scare ya...SORRY! :):)

    **Mango cobbler did it!

    indeed! that did it and tnxxx to u HUGGGGGGZ!

    Who's Harry?







    ~~La_Vida_Loca

    :) tnxx sweety!







    ~~Lera

    hey tnxx Lera!

    no no no book writing...I dun wanna make ppl cry reading my pathetic ghost stories lol!







    ~~Blessed

    ** seeing a figure sitting at this little table in the room that my brother slept.

    OMG u really saw it? what was is like?







    ~~Reflextion

    **Hostel

    nope..Im gonna rent it this weekend...tnxx! :) Na dun worry, I like to watch horror movies...but ofcourse I wont sleep for the next 6 months.








    ~~Niki_Yokota

    mwahhhh Niki babez!

    I wanna see u in a halter-neck top...bring it on.








    ~~Ghee

    tnxxx babez mwahhh!

    u have a spooky story to share? omg tell us all na.







    ~~Hazel_Dream

    **.. men are not easy to get drenched with .

    they r...lol cos they r so easy :):)







    ~~Amutha

    why the distance with Mr.Ghost?







    ~~Mumbai_Guy

    read my latest post na :)



    Keshi.

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  85. ~~Anup.777

    Anup hey how have ya been?

    **well, i don't think there are ghosts ... but there are spirits ... so guess thats what you encountered ...

    Isnt ghosts the same as spirits? I could be wrong. plz explain.







    ~~Angel

    ty Angel! :)








    ~~Tanvi

    hey Tanvi Im pretty good ty and urself? I left a comment in ur blog yday. I was thrilled to see u here after a long time. Hope all is well with u sweety. TC n hugggggz!







    ~~Alex

    ty Alex :)







    ~~Saby

    so ur basically in love with the boobs..not with the girls.







    ~~Ash

    ty Ash!







    ~~Strictly_for_my_friends

    hey so u tagged me too lol ok ty!








    ~~Pri

    omg I forgot the Warning indeed...so sorry :(








    ~~Musings

    m000nie mwahhhhhhh! Ur a party-gal now ha? COOOL! I want pics!!!







    ~~Jo

    I knew it that u wud like this song :)







    ~~Kavi

    :) tnxxx!







    ~~Starry_Nights

    oye starry I cant wait to read that experience of ur's...plzz put it up soon, ty!







    ~~White_Forest

    tnxx mate :)







    ~~Southpaw

    Im well ty and urself Southy? Sorry this ans is late. I wasnt here yday..too busy.







    ~~KK

    ty KK :):)







    ~~zombie

    Salsa it was and many more...u should have been here Misty!








    ~~Saby

    wut did I forget Saby?







    ~~Jeevan

    lol BOOOOOOOOOOOO Jeevan! :):)







    ~~Sittingnut

    heyyy hows u?


    **. next time you see one ask him or preferably her, to give me a visit.

    haha ok...well if it's a beautiful woman, I'll send her ur way for sure ;-)



    Keshi.

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  86. Sweet Keshi,
    I know you are a fine writer and your prose is lucid. You also write with confidence.

    "Room 367" would have made it to the best of the selected short stories for the Commonwealth Short Story Competition. The 2,000 pounds and fame would have increased your mileage.

    You should write novels.

    I have not seen any ghost. And the ghosts must be scared of the light of the aura of God surrrounding me. Evil spirits keep off me. And ghosts are evil spirits.

    God bless.

    N.B:
    I read all your recent posts. But commenting has been difficult due to the poor Internet speed here.

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  87. ~~Fleiger

    u really think my story is good? :)







    ~~Orkinla_Osinachi

    hey Ori ty! :) But I really dun think I qualify for prize-winning level book-writing hehehe. Im just a bathroom-writer lol!


    **Evil spirits keep off me. And ghosts are evil spirits.

    u really think all of em r evil? I sometimes think some of em maybe friendly...maybe they want company..even tho Im very scared of em!

    ty Ori!



    Keshi.

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  88. hmmm ... by ghosts people generally refer to people who're dead but hang around ... i dont believe in that ... as i subscribe to the theory of one life and then heaven or hell ....

    but i do believe that spirits/demons/devils/angels exist - the forces of good and evil ... Anyways, lets not get into that ... its me and my whacky beliefs .. :)

    BTW just read ur later posts ... and u r looking gorgeous dear ... no wonder so many guys were floored ... Glad u had a gr8 time!!! :) and do let us know of the progress wid the lucky guy who got ur number ... :)

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  89. Yes, the story is good... so is your experience. I would like to see a ghost some day, would be interesting.

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  90. ~~Anup.777

    oh ok Anup :)

    That guy didnt even call me yet LOL!







    ~~Fleiger

    **. I would like to see a ghost some day, would be interesting.

    In that case I can just come ard at night with my hair out in a white dress...lolz!



    Keshi.

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  91. I will keep coffee ready then ;)

    Anyways, a lady in white dress with hair spread out? I wish ghosts would keep up with times... I mean, can't they get a jeans or anything?

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  92. Fleiger here already? cool!

    yep this ghost loves coffee and cud u have some blue-berry muffins ready too? :):)

    lol @jeans! how abt a ghost in a halter-neck top and a skirt?



    Keshi.

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  93. Real good story, one more talent of yours Kesh.
    I am really scared of ghosts and all.....
    I love that song too babes..ummmmmmmmmmah........hope my late visits didn't annoy you :-

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  94. That would definitely be an improvement in their communication skills with masses.

    Blueberry muffins? Sure...

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  95. ~~Dumbdodi

    awww ur so sweet UMMMMAAAAAAAAAH! :):)

    hell na Im not annoyed with u at all...how can I get annoyed with someone as sweet as u r?

    tc n huggggggggggggggz!








    ~~Fleiger

    lol ok then :)



    Keshi.

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  96. would you take my business card - next time you find one - i am seriously want to date with a ghost. female ghost not male one - i dont date with male ghost (heie) only drinks with them

    let me know.. i am not making fun of it - just serious i am seriously every night search i can find a ghost - i dont know some how i felt only at nights ghosts come..i want to have a chit chat with ghost. - reading your other story

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  97. lol KS but Im not a ghost...but if I do see one I'll ask her to drop by ur room okkk? :)

    Keshi.

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  98. i know you are not one. you are a beautiful angel. i know. but if you can tell me how i can see a ghost - it help me a lot. you wont believe - i have done crazy stuff on new moon night, going to grave at night, making some dark rituals - but never happened to meet a ghost.

    I seriously want to see the ghost and it doesnt appear to me

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  99. Me so fucking scared of stuff like this..though havent seen any ghosts till now, don even have the desire to see one.

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  100. ~~KS

    just do one thing...dun look for any. :)






    ~~Neha

    hehe ur scaredy cat lol!


    Keshi.

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