I danced here for a little whileAnd I met alot of hearts
Hearts that longed for mine
Some hearts that made me cry
But I'm only a flash
That burns for a while
A flash that may pass
And become a memory in your life
A watercolor shade
Of an aura that used to be
A snowflake in the mountains
That melted in Spring
A Daisy in the valley
Sleeping tight in Winter
A breeze among the trees
So free how it feels
Many tears I cried here
Spears of pain I felt
But I danced again
And it was only for a while
You didn't want me
But can I stay for a while
I will dance for you
Even if my feet just died
Now they are calling me
It's my time to dance
To dance with no shoes
And no one to glance
Im in the woods
Im in the lake
No one to shadow me
My spirit's awake
Soaring high
With the angels above
Now I'm the dried flower
That sits between your pages
Do you still remember
How we used to be
Do tears well up now
When you think of me?
--Keshi.
Current Music: Viva Forever by Spice Girls
82 Cranium Signets:
Wheres Uttsy today?
-Sources told me that she was spotted on a cafe at nariman point drooling at the guys...lol kiddin' i mean she was in a cafe but waiting for her colleagues...lol
Ssssssssshhhhh....enough!
Time and time again i hv told u, use those 2 words 'F**K OFF' generously and life will be quite easy for u....
Now cheer up or i'll hv to beg infront of saby to do a striptease for u....lol
this is lovely kesh....:)
had me....smilin thru tears...i so luvd the lines...all of it...
i love spice girls :)
hope you're feeling better
Beautiful Words Keshi.
Truth lies under its eyes.
Overwhelmed my heart. *smiles*
lovely piece Keshi
& there was a time in school when I was sooo crazy about Spice Girls
so lovely keshi, i like it.
But I don't want you to be a dried flower ;P hahaha
I loved this Keshi!
Made me smile the biggest smile!
Beautiful!
I like this side of you better my dear!
Take care!
Hugggggz!
-Margie:)
I loved this Keshi!
Made me smile the biggest smile!
Beautiful!
I like this side of you better my dear!
Take care!
Hugggggz!
-Margie:)
WOW dear...after a long time I came here and so so happy to see ur creation a true feeling sprouting through your mind...
Awesome is the word...do write more
huggggggzzzz
cheers
Keshi..Bravo...Excellent work...Way to go girl!!!!!Keep writing
BTW I was crazy about spice girls toooo
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
now this is some nice means of expressing thyself :)
didn't know u were quite a poet ... wonder what makes ppl all of a sudden come up with such things :-?
it was a gud one NUT ... tho I didn't understand everybit of it ... me got poor literary skills
Very nice.. One more side to Keshi..
You have touched the heart with your lines few
Its difficult to forget old despite the new
True love is missing amidst the lies
I feel your tears reflected in my eyes..
Hows that !!
Keep it up
Oh Keshi, it sounds so beautiful and yet I cant really put the feeling I'm getting from this in words.
Are you missing someone dear?
Take care.
Wow, this is splendid. Nice work Kesh.
hmm interesting
That transition of feelings fm havin hearts around u wantin u to a dried flower in pages was simply beautiful!!!
missed two post...blogger is doing something wierd...I could see the two post today only...anyways
Rating...loved the post...totally get what you mean....can be very irritating...but you got it out of your system superbly..cheers :)
Only for a while....beautiful lines...off late I have realised I enjoy reading poetry a lot....keep writing :)
keshi, I am smiling, but listen to this from some one else.
"Dance till the stars come down
from the rafters
Dance, Dance,
Dance till you drop"
-W.H. Auden-
I loved that one, keshi!
Keshi, It is really awesome. I was a gr8 fan of spice girls too.
/no one to shadow me/
We all are here for you keshi.. Never feel alone anymore.
"Do tears well up now
When you think of me?"
tears of happiness/joy.. im sure they show up.. if they dont it was probably a futile dance for someone/something there never was..
A real nice one.. am not actually into poetry and stuff but I loved the way this one is penned. A first timer to this site and yup..... It is a Great blog!!
Beautiful words & I hope u r doing better gal! Cheer up! :)))
Did you write that poem, Kesh? Awww...awesome! truly awesome..
hmm
am kind of fine
BURP!!!
Good night
ERRRRR!!!
Good morning and keep smiling.
raj...
**Wheres Uttsy today?
-Sources told me that she was spotted on a cafe at nariman point drooling at the guys.
i simply wished i cud see some hunks .. mera time pass hota tha..loll
**Now cheer up or i'll hv to beg infront of saby to do a striptease for u....lol
u serious...loll
keshi thats a beautifull wordings...
tell me y u upset.. aww i was away for 2 days doesnt mean u should be soo upset..hehhe .. now cheer up we have some striptease show n our way .... hehehheheh na we gonna ask raj to do it ..lollzzz
now sweety cheer up dont feel sad... we still have to dance together, go to the wooods, have some good food, keep yapping ard, u gotta wear my backless choli, n we r P n VP of too many rehabs...n wat not??? rem??
now i can see some1's lip curving upward...:)
muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
lubbb ya...
Me just wondering--- Angry keshi is better or sad one? Now dont say "Keshi is the best", i know that.... hehe!
***Do you still remember
How we used to be
Do tears well up now
When you think of me?
ahem.... who is it for? Whoever it is, dont bother too much.... stay cool, (i can send you some snow from the himalayas).... okay okay....
The poem was beautiful. Okay, that was a compliment and you are supposed to smile!
this is tender :D
Do you still remember
How we used to be
Do tears well up now
When you think of me?
the end just clinched it.
wonderful.
Awesome Keshi!!
Very nicely written...
everyone's writing poem...except me :( (Jus kidding)
WoW! beautiful Keshi.brought tears to my eyes. you write so well. need to post more of your writing. loved it.take care . special huggggggz to you
beautiful lines :)
Somehow I am too blunt to understand poetry.
See, I am still in the cave man era...
Well this seems kinda sad...duh, a lost love, someone you can't forget? Lovely words, but sad, seems.
Sorry I didn't get around to your Fuck Off! post. It would be sensory overload. But for all those you would want to say fuck off to, I second the motion.
Hey Keshi...I guess this is the first poetry outta your heart tht I read.... I like it coz it speaks of a hidden or underlying story with words like dance and others. I get two pictures, one leading ot the other. Its great. "A snowflake in the mountains
That melted in Spring"
Awhhh...How many times I have felt this emotion but not in these words...Thts why I said it gives me an underlying meaning using simple words. :)
aww..why such a low sounding note?
Of course we will all remember u....how can we not remember all these lovely notes...big huggzz and muwaaahh!
... was sittin' here last night, wrote comment and again blogger sucks!! ;( after publishing its gone grrrr!!! it gets my mood so i went to bed angry w/ nobody hehe!
....but awwwwww when i woke up this morning, while havin' my coffee am checkin' my emails and someone made me so happy ^_^
... thanx sweetie muaaahhh, thats lot of compliments hehe...u made my day na hugssss u! am so touched by ur words dear... i felt the same thing for u , i told u its very rare to find true one and im so lucky to have u too! thanxxxxxxx.....
...and ur post adds the same feelin', so touched by the message here....
** Do you still remember
How we used to be
Do tears well up now
When you think of me? **
... Kesh ill always be around!
have a nice day, take care u sexy!!
enjoy lunchhhhh!
luv,
-kathy-
Kind of sad. Odd how when digging through old mementos you can come across something that sparks memories of past loves, eh?
very poetic and beautiful words :)
i seek a moment that lasts a lifetime
and these moments and memories of Keshi will stay on with me forever...as the name says Keshi Forever :)
beautiful words dear....but when i think of Keshi...only one thing happens..i smile..so u too keep smiling
Keshi,
Here's a golden thought from Lord Byron.....
“But words are things, and a small drop of ink,
Falling, like dew, upon a thought, produces
That which makes thousands, perhaps millions, think.”
Such were the wonderful words which came from your post – a beautiful person with a beautiful mind and a beautiful heart!
wow...
no words comin outta me...
*Silent Admiration*
~Krish
Hey Kesh !
I was at a wedding too .. and was in a saree on all the days :)
Read all ur posts ... so many snaps .. woo hooo !!!!
take care dear
Awww...spell bounded with the flow of tender words...:) Just say beautiful!
Read previous post! you sounded angry! I too did tell some one "Knock off" but very politely...:D
Nice song btw...Take care! Huggggggggzzz
How are ya Keshi?
*huggiz
Hey..I m bak...
gr88 work buddy...I m impressed...
Keshi is full of emotions...
dear,u r so creative...
I always cherish ur frndship...
Harry!!
Lovely.
//Now I'm the dried flower
That sits between your pages
Do you still remember//
excellent imagery, beautiful and straight from the heart. What inspired you keshi? life, or the world?
"Now I'm the dried flower
That sits between your pages
Do you still remember
How we used to be"..
Beautifully written!
wow!!!
loved these lines "Now I'm the dried flower
That sits between your pages
Do you still remember
How we used to be
Do tears well up now
When you think of me?"
actually I loved the whole poem!and you won't be forgotten...keep bloggin with the same honsety Keshi, you keep many going:)
wow!!!
loved these lines "Now I'm the dried flower
That sits between your pages
Do you still remember
How we used to be
Do tears well up now
When you think of me?"
actually I loved the whole poem!and you won't be forgotten...keep bloggin with the same honsety Keshi, you keep many going:)
Hey amazing words!.. but same old chillness swiping across!.. cheer up man!.. forget the word others!.. live as you want to live!..
I'll never ever scroll down your posts, lol!, but this poem was super. A ghost writer must have written it for the Spice Girls, if that's the lyrics of the song.
Most excellent composition! You are a natural poet me dear. And I imagine you dance very well too. :-)
Hey u know what, only y'day night i did a catchingup on ur posts (only the first page.. ok :) )
You look stunning in those pics. And i even checked the hotel site where u danced the night out :D
This poem is quite touchy, it's beautiful. I hope it's just a poem :)
i sense there is some deep hidden meaning to the lines here.. is everything ok at ur end?
Sweet Keshi,
One in a while you compose an "Ogbanje" post and now it is an "Ogbanje" poem. And the more you reveal your enchanted spirit, the more my heart beats for you.
The words reveal the mystique that makes you unique.
I understand you, heart, soul and spirit.
No matter what happens to anyone of us, life goes on.
Que sera, sera,
When I was just a little girl,
I asked my mother, "What will I be?
Will I be pretty?
Will I be rich?"
Here's what she said to me:
Que sera, sera,
Whatever will be, will be.
The future's not ours to see,
Que sera, sera,
What will be, will be.
When I grew up and fell in love,
I asked my lover, "What lies ahead?
Will we have rainbows day after day?"
Here's what my lover said:
Que sera, sera,
Whatever will be, will be.
The future's not ours to see,
Que sera, sera,
What will be, will be.
Now I have children of my own,
They ask their mother, "What will I be?
Will I be pretty? Will I be rich?"
I tell them tenderly:
Que sera, sera,
Whatever will be, will be.
The future's not ours to see,
Que sera, sera,
What will be, will be.
C'est la Vie!
God bless you my Aussie sweetheart.
N.B:
You miss your Dad badly.
But don't worry.
God will take care of you and your mother. And will give you the man who will be your father, brother and keeper and husband too.
Keshi, that read like something from a funeral...
I remember that song by the Spice Girls too.
Remember???? Your unforgettable Keshi girl!!! ***HUUGGZZZ***
Now I'm the dried flower
That sits between your pages
Thoughtful phrase.
You know, I have a journal from long ago, with a dried monkey flower in it from a boy I loved. He picked it during a hike we were on in the hills - it was then, and is still now a wonderful memory. We split our ways many years ago, but the flower still can bring a smile to my face.
~~Southpaw
lolz Uttsy was drooling at guys? I think it's the other way Southy.
**use those 2 words 'F**K OFF' generously and life will be quite easy for u
if u mean that I should say F#CK OFF to the person(s) I meant in this poem, Southy they r too close to me...I just cant. It's a sad situation but it's the raw truth.
tnxxx for being there for me.
~~Ishita
tnxxx Ish mwahhhhh! Dun cry now...
~~Elaine
tnxxx Sweety Im much better today cos of all u lovely ppl. Hugggggggz!
~~Jewel_Rays
it sure does ha...tnxxx sweety mwahhhh!
~~Ektaran
yes...Spice Girls had some goo dnumbers too...like this one. tnxxxxxx sweety!
~~Die_Murane
hehehe Murane tnxxxx!
~~Samuru999
mwahhh Margie tnxxx! :):)
~~Dawn
Huggggggggz mah sis! tnxxx for the encouragement.
~~Dumbdodi
tnxxx girl mwahhhhhh!
~~Samy
huggggggz Samy!
**wonder what makes ppl all of a sudden come up with such things
I guess it's real life experiences that make ppl become poets.
~~Parag
**You have touched the heart with your lines few
Its difficult to forget old despite the new
True love is missing amidst the lies
I feel your tears reflected in my eyes..
I was spell-bound at how good r u Parag! Did u write that instantly?
tnxxx so much HUGGGGGGGGZ!
Keshi.
~~Christabelle
Chris heyy!
**Are you missing someone dear?
yes...so many ppl Chris. Including myself.
~~ME
ty :)
~~Hazel_Dream
WC and tnxxx!
~~Seema
WC Seema and Im glad u could make good sense out of my words :)
~~Neihal
tnxxx girl!
I write poems only when Im really emotional and it's always related to something real in my life.
~~Gangadhar
Hugggggggz Gangzz n tnxxx!
~~Jac
**"Dance till the stars come down
from the rafters
Dance, Dance,
Dance till you drop"
Nice one. I always dance no matter what...even if I'm to die the next minute...I wont go without a smile and a dance for what's life if u dunno how to have fun. tnxxx Jac!
~~Priya
ty Priya HUGGGGGGZ!
~~s0ulAsylum
** if they dont it was probably a futile dance for someone/something there never was..
U got the true essence of this poem...well-done girl!
~~Sushsyam
WC Sushsyam n tnxxx :)
Keshi.
~~Has_To_Be_Me
ty sweety huggggggggz!
~~KL
yes I did :) tnxxx KL!
~~Kumar_Chetan
lol Kumar u sound like u ate too much??
~~Uttara
Uttsy mwahhhhhhh! See what 1 day of ur absence can do to me? :( Im all smilezz today cos ur bakk...awww..
**we still have to dance together, go to the wooods, have some good food, keep yapping ard, u gotta wear my backless choli, n we r P n VP of too many rehabs...
lol yes...and I wanna wear a burkha b4 I do the pole-dance...wut abt Raj?
~~Eclipsed_Thoughts
heyy thanks so much mah kickass partner :) huggggggz!
yep send me some pure snow from the Himalayas...wow how nice it wud be to just touch it.
tnxxx for being sooo sweet to me...u guys rock!
~~La_Vida_Loca
much more tender than my prev post ha :):) tnxx!
Keshi.
~~Raghav
tnxx Raghav!
~~KK
hehe so u write poems too na :)
~~Starry_Nights
tnxx hun...u put a smile on my face HUGGGGGGZ!
~~White_Forest
ty! :)
~~Mr.Maverick
Arun caveman or not ur a good man :)
~~Within_Without
** a lost love, someone you can't forget?
not a lost love...rather a love lost.
tnxx WW :)
~~Scribblez_To_Wakeup
tnxxx sweety...aww Im gonna miss u for a while :(
~~Ekta
heyy na Im ok. This poem is for someone in my life who might never know what I mean.
ofcourse I know u guys will rem me :) tnxx n huggggggz!
~~Lil_Kath
MWAHHH Kath! I know wut u mean...we feel the connection from so far away na...how nice.
hugggggz n tnxxx for all the love n faith in me!
~~The_Phosgene_Kid
**Odd how when digging through old mementos you can come across something that sparks memories of past loves
so true...and some loves r lost while it's not even in the past.
~~Smiley
ty :)
~~Desperado
**i seek a moment that lasts a lifetime
what a beautiful thought...I feel the same way abt certain moments.
**and these moments and memories of Keshi will stay on with me forever...as the name says Keshi Forever
awww HUGGGGGGGGGGGZ! I will always rem u too..cos ur very unique in a very special way.
~~Nikita
Niki mwahhh!
**“But words are things, and a small drop of ink,
Falling, like dew, upon a thought, produces
That which makes thousands, perhaps millions, think.”
awww thats sooo beautiful! ty so much for sharing such wisdom with me. And u r the same!
~~Kautilya
heyyy Krish! :)
Silent admiration is beautiful. tnxxx!
~~Deepa
now Deepa I wanna see u in saree n all...when r we gonna see that :(
~~Contented
tnxxx mate!
Im not very polite to impolite ppl...why should we be...just say F#ck off instead of Knowck off :)
~~Jewel_Rays
Im good Amy, tnxx! I was so busy yday that I couldnt reply to the comments here, so sorry! I see that u have missed me awww huggggggggz!
Also I was in this wierd mood...I just wanted to run away n disappear forever...have u ever felt like that?
~~Harry
WB Harry n tnxx a ton for the encouragment! Hope all is well with u mate.
~~Karmic_Jay
ty Jay!
~~Ghost_Particle
**What inspired you keshi? life, or the world?
Life...ppl...experiences...bonds...the illusion of life...
tnxxx Ghosty!
~~Dinesh
hey how r u Dinesh?
tnxxx!
~~Yashita
tnxxx hun n u too mwahhhhhhh!
~~Sujit
tnxx Sujit! But it's so hard to live w.o. being affected by the near n dear ones...and why do we always wanna impress the ones that take us for granted? I hate myself sometimes.
~~Twisted_Truth
thats not the lyrics of the song TT...it's a poem I wrote within 10mins...it's very real in my life.
~~Tre
ty, mwahhhh Tre!
~~Invincible
v000nie WB I missed u! How r things with ya? Where have u been all this time? I felt so alone sometimes with u and m000nie being so irregular with blogs. I miss those days...but Im glad ur bakk!
This poem is very real in my life v000nie...sad but very real. tnxxxx!
~~Niki_Yokota
I wrote this poem Niki...it's not the lyrics of the song from Spice Girls :)
tnxxx mwahhh!
~~Sudeep
u guessed that right Sudeep. Let God decide my fate. Hugggggggz!
Keshi.
~~Vibhor
hey WC Vibhor n tnxx!
**dried flowers are always been taken care of....they ar the loviest memories of our life...
thats such a beautiful thing to say....
~~Orikinla_Osinachi
Ori thanks...u always make my heart smile and always bring alot of warmth to this place.
**Que sera, sera,
My mum loves that song...she always sings it. And how true...the future is not our's to see. And what good is life if we can see it.
tnxxx for all ur angel blessings Ori hugggggggggz!
~~AnonymousBlogger
**Keshi, that read like something from a funeral...
AB u got that right...there's someone dead in that poem. Ur brilliant with ur analysis smarty pants!
~~Meg
and u too babez MWAHHHH!
~~Terry
mwahhh pretty woman!
**with a dried monkey flower in it from a boy I loved.
awww this reminded me of a flower I kept for ages from school days...it's still there.
**He picked it during a hike we were on in the hills - it was then, and is still now a wonderful memory. We split our ways many years ago, but the flower still can bring a smile to my face.
see how the memory of that love comes back to u in that dried flower form...thats where that that connection still lives. How beautiful!
Keshi.
Hmmmm...
Keshi, I'm sure there's a big difference between a lost love and a love lost. But what is it?
If you're uncomfortable sharing that, don't worry about it. Don't have to post this. I'll get it.
heyy mate !
huggggz!
lovely poem!
do you write them often ? they can be comforting ?
i never could write poems, except for one or two haiku.
was busy last few days. :-( hopefully will end today :-)
hope you will have a great day :-)
Good day keshi...
How r we doing today?
~~Within_Without
G'day WW! :)
**I'm sure there's a big difference between a lost love and a love lost.
yes there is...A lost love is a love that once existed but no more. A love lost is a love that's ard but is not recognised/accepted.
:) Not uncomfy at all. tnxxxx!
~~Sittingnut
helloo hows u?
I only write poems when Im deep in emotions and when it's very real to my life.
have a good not-so-busy weekend! :)
Keshi.
yes.. Had written those lines on the spot..
Well .. you inspirre me Keshi !!
Hi Keshi..:)
Also I was in this wierd mood...I just wanted to run away n disappear forever...have u ever felt like that?
yup, i have like that before many a times. Especially when i am upset with myself. :)
*huggiz
Hiya Keshi!!! Beautiful poem... loved it tons!!! :)
I have sometimes, shed tears thinkin about the few frnds whom i really loved, and hu no longer keep in touch wid me... with whom i have shared a lot of my feelings and whom i thought would be permanent in my life... people change quite easily... some people can be the "F#@%k off kind" when it comes to relationships.. but i simply cant get that into my head... i need a lot of time to get over such feelings...
i too think if sometimes, they shed a tear or two when they think of me(if at all they do, that is)...
huggggggz nutty
** I guess it's real life experiences that make ppl become poets.
hmm I know what u mean :) ... I'v done it myself :D ... life's strange ... u think ur incapable of something n then all of a sudden u realize it ain't so
guess the say holds well ... u only are what you believe u r :)
Beautiful.. very beautiful
beauty lies in these words:)
beautiful lady of nice kind heart how else can write - will she be writing a devilish ? heiehiehei
~~Parag
**Well .. you inspirre me Keshi !!
aww Im ever so glad :) tnxxx!
~~Jewel Rays
**yup, i have like that before many a times. Especially when i am upset with myself.
yes Amy...and then I feel great cos there r angels like u to lift me up...ty n hugggggz!
~~Prithz
ty Prithz sweety!
**people change quite easily... some people can be the "F#@%k off kind" when it comes to relationships..
well thats true..but if they were the ones who chose to leave ya, then dun sweat...
**i too think if sometimes, they shed a tear or two when they think of me(if at all they do, that is)...
Im sure they do. But alot of the time the EGO prevents ppl from saying Sorry and coming back to their old friends that they hurt.
~~SamY
huggggggz Samy! :)
**life's strange ... u think ur incapable of something n then all of a sudden u realize it ain't so
thats so true...all ur hidden skills come out with experiences...as if they r dormant till they get waken up by the right trigger...
tnxxx Samy!
~~Aditi
tnxx Aditi...and huggggggggz!
~~Jeevan
**beauty lies in these words:)
that itself is beautiful Jeevan..tnxxx!
~~Known Stranger
**beautiful lady of nice kind heart how else can write - will she be writing a devilish ?
hehe I can be a devil too...u know that na :)
~~Niki yokota
its ok Niki..mwahhhhh n tnxxx!
:)
Keshi.
awww....this is beautiful...glad i read it...
hugs!
"Now I'm the dried flower
That sits between your pages
Do you still remember
How we used to be
Do tears well up now
When you think of me?"
fav part...
i feel that way too sometimes...
and i move on..whether they still care or not...i gues we still will!
~~the_ego_has_landed
ty sweety hugggggggggggz!
Keshi.
I was about to check my horoscopes on yahoo, but then I checked my blogsite first, then I saw the NEXT BLOG icon and i just clicked and clicked and I got her. These are the moments when I appreciate modern technology so much...hope u don't mind, i picked up some photos and some poems...I am in between good and bad right now..in between happiness and sadness...but then again, as my friend would call me, i am a tough nail..Keep it up...If i have more time I'll read the rest of ur entries..;0
tnxx Justine keep smiling.
Keshi.
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