Thursday, March 2

Awakening

I was. My body lies in a deep sleep...blind, deaf, mute, frozen...but I see, hear, talk, feel...no one hears me, sees me...no one talks to me, feels me...I see them, hear them loud, talk to them, feel them for I'm everywhere. Frozen in time, frozen words, frozen touch but I roam like the breeze. My skin so white and lips so dark, my heart so scorched yet beating moist memories aloud. Last journey severed mid-way, yet all the events fresh as dew. I stumbled, I fell, I gave up...but I can't go...no not yet. Unspoken words, undone deeds, unfulfilled desires...love is all I left behind...hearts scarred for life but I sailed to my next destination. 'twas too short, too good, too frightening, too lost, too quick. A bright flash once and a faded memory I've become. This sleep will last forever not, for my travels are a many...and I take refuge in another womb, in another time. And I begin. As the sleeping plant gets life with a sprinkle of rain, as new leaves sprout when Spring arrives, as the frozen lake melts with a kiss of the Sun, as the birds fly North when seasons change, I will rise up from the ashes, from this sleep, from this deafening silence, from this darkest night, into the dawn...blood will flow, my heart will pump again...lips will move and my skin will breathe...I will be seen, heard, talked to and felt again...another journey, another awakening...and I will be.

103 Cranium Signets:

tt said...

This is beautiful. And unwarranted.

luvwannabefree25 said...

I was visitng Autumns site tonight and decided to see what you had to say... wow... amazing...

AmitKen said...

WoW! keshi.. that was really wonderful.

one of the best piece of writings i've seen on the blogs i visit recently... :) keep it up.

Sugababee said...

You write so damn well...
This is truly a yummeh piece Kesh.
;)

kannan udayarajan said...

whacky....! so you got reborn...?

hihi

Keshi ..I linkin you..hope you dont mind!
:)

Jewel Rays said...

Thats the spirit Keshi. You will arise to breathe again. And this i believe..Love the writings..Deep and displayed. *huggiz*

Shikha said...

Wow..perfect piece to read first in the morning:)

4u2nvau/Rohit said...

I gota nominate this post on Amu's post dedicated to you :)

LOL for a change I understood one of ur posts :p

BTW you really miss me??.....REALLY???

Keshi said...

~~Twisted_Truth

thanks but why unwarranted?




~~Luvwannabefree25

WC mate and thanks :)





~~Amitken

hiya Amit :):) Thanks!

Wut d u derive from it?





~~Sugababee

Heyy Suga thanks :)





~~Kannan_Udayarajn

Hello Kannan :)

U can make anything out of this post...it's how u perceive it..tell me what u see..





~~Jewel_Rays

hey thanks Amy :) U got a great view of it...brilliant!





~~Shikha

thanks :)




~~NV

aww but d u really u'stand it? lol ok tell me what u think of it...

I was mad at u for not telling me abt ur new blog space sir!!

**BTW you really miss me??.....REALLY???

can u miss some one for lies?


Keshi.

saby said...

, after life?
there may not be one
,

live life like there is no tomorrow
u love somedody, show it

u hate somebody, tell him
better still, punch him in the jaw

so when u go
u wont have no regrets

Kripa Shankar said...

"frozen lake melts"..

"from this darkest night into the dawn"...

truly amazing metaphors to conveys both sides of the picture...awakening and rebirth
after all an awakening is rebirth.

good one keshi

uttara said...

keshi ...

u r fucking damnnn good ...lolll u write soo damnn welll


lemme continue a bit ;)

***another journey, another awakening...and I will be.
u will be with me .. my twin sis .. we will be reborn together ...feel the heartbeats of each other ...:) hold our hands n see the new sunshine together ...:)

this will be our new life ... we will start together ...:)

HUGGGZZZZZZZZZ hun ...muahhhhhh
lub uuuuuuuu

pradster13 said...

this post seems to be about hope...the coming of another morning after a loong night. the spirit that pushes us forward...the eternal sunshine!
what do you say keshi?

pradster13 said...

this post seems to be about hope...the coming of another morning after a loong night. the spirit that pushes us forward...the eternal sunshine!
what do you say keshi?

Queen Bee said...

Beautiful...... baby :)

Aelee said...

keshi been to long away in my own head.what a nice post..oh..did miss the energy of ya..glad all is well.

Aelee said...

This is damn good by the way..under writer for me..any bids here,Keshi.

I said...

Awakening from normal sleep is hard enough. so this awakening must be harder, uh?

Die Muräne said...

Wooaah, Keshi, you're such a great writer! I'm almost in tears lol

always loooove to read your blog!!

I had a wow-dream tonight (but I won't tell, smile)

tt said...

I was.
...and I will be.

Both sacrifice the present. That's why. Romantic aesthism.

still_figuring_out said...

awesome, keshi.

just awesome.

excuse my short comment, but i don`t think anyting more i say can do justice to this beautifully written post.

desperado said...

dont knw wht inspired dis..but beautiful words

you already are..just believe in it.

Jeevan said...

very Beautiful sleep Keshi. My skin so white... and the as sleeping plants get life is lovely.:)

PRADEEP K. said...

Very meditative. Forgive the expression, but it is so very close to what I call the Chasmic consciousness.

This is a masterpiece, Keshi!
(Humble Salutations)

kannan udayarajan said...

ok ..ok..so you are not yet reborn...just dead as of now...

:))

just kiddin yaar...

"A bright flash once and a faded memory I've become"
poetic ...and my fav line of the post..

but i have to admit,the picture you have painted with your words is just superb..!!But one question...

Why such a topic..?What 's the motivation?

wallycrawler said...

It's unanimous ! Everyone loves you and your poetry .

Why do they hate me so much ? What am I chopped liver or som'thin ?

Again beautiful writings from a very beautiful person !

SaffronSaris said...

Keshi being poetic and dreamy mmmmmm

Sudeep said...

Hiya babezzz..

u remember I had said last yr tht I m gonna be an enlightened person after reading ur blogs... :))

this one takes the cake of all..

waiting for my rebirth (hope so in Australia) ;)

Neha said...

very beautifully written!
Thanks for visitin :)
I'm here for the first time.. awesoem blog u'v got!
keep writing !

Trée said...

Kissed by the sun. Hope springs eternal. Are we not all born anew with each and every moment? The day that dawns has never been nor will ever be again. Die to the past, hold the future at bay, and bath in the present moment. Beautiful my dear angel. Oh, and don't ever color your hair. I like it just the way it is. :-)

niki yokota said...

awww~ its awesome!!
but i feel pain & sadness in this post.
ru okay keshi-chan?? (^o^;;;
or did i misinterpet it??
pls take care and sleep well!!!

>|' ; '| said...

reminds me of the phoenix...

a new beginning. i wonder if u let go of the unfinished deeds and the scarred hearts when u rise from the ashes of ur older self. or would it be sweet amnesia. a chance to taste the world all over again. be it bitter, bland or sweet, or as usual a combination of all, in proportions we can never imagine.

>|' ; '| said...

and o btw...i am easily persuaded by good negotiators :-s

Jigal.. said...

hi

damned yaar....

Again a wonderful post...

U r writting so beautifully....

hey Swts I salute u...

another journey, another awakening....

aahaa.... Kya bat hai!!!

bye

take care

Miranda said...

Beautiful pic, beautiful post.

:P fuzzbox said...

It is so good to see you stretching those skills. Luv it, absolutely luv it!!! Luv the pic too.

Sujit said...

wow amazing peice of work!.. nice though.. with cool pace..! what to be another keshi again .. rekindling your rebirth ??

anup.777 said...

very very well written girl ... seriously beautiful ... u have a way with words buddy! Keep it up! :)

Mind Curry said...

all the` worlds a stage huh? excellent keshi..whats keshi btw? is it your name? what does it mean?

Jackal said...

keshi hats off to u....absolutely amazing.....brilliant.......tcc byeee

Tarun said...

Wake-up girl.....very nice write-up

sittingnut said...

good morning friend!
nice post , well written.
is it merely a creative exercise? or is it an expression of some sort of rebirth in yourself?
anyway
you certainly will be :-)

The Phoenix said...

Great writing. I feel very relaxed now. I think I will take a nap.

Keshi said...

What a variety of enlightening interpretaions...WELL DONE folks! U guys r the smartest bunch I have ever seen...very creative, experienced and well aware of ur senses...u guys AWAKEN a passion in me that I never knew of b4...a passion to see beyond the naked eye and feel beyond the naked emotions...

Thanks so much for ur very intelligent comments and I will get back to each one of u soon :)

Keshi.

Keshi said...

~~Saby

Hi Saby hows u?

**, after life?
there may not be one,

and there may well be one...:)


**u hate somebody, tell him
better still, punch him in the jaw

lol I do that all the time :):)


**so when u go
u wont have no regrets

when u go, and after u go, will u still know of ur regrets?





~~Kripa_Shankar

heyyy Kripa!

**truly amazing metaphors to conveys both sides of the picture...awakening and rebirth

Thanks :)
To be reborn, there must be a sleeping phase...a dead phase...awakening is rebirth and it could be the rebirth of anything...




~~Uttara

heyy Utttsy hugggggggggggz! muah muah muah I missed ya!


**u r fucking damnnn good ...

ahemm..lol okkk :):) thanks!


**u will be with me .. my twin sis .. we will be reborn together ...feel the heartbeats of each other ...

awwww u think so? but next time we will be on the same soil...Im sure we will be - huggggggggz mah eternal sis :)




~~Pradster13

heyy Praddz!


**this post seems to be about hope...the coming of another morning after a loong night. the spirit that pushes us forward...the eternal sunshine!
what do you say keshi?

I think u r brilliant in ur thinking! Amazing how u grasped such a deep meaning out of this - that sure can be seen as Hope...rebirth of Hope and Courage and Strength that once was dead...awakening of lost times, passions, desires and hope...awakening of Life in u...





~~Queen_Bee

hey thanks babez ;-)





~~Aelee

hey WB Aelee...how u been?


**did miss the energy of ya..

aww I missed ur presence too...


**under writer for me..any bids here,Keshi.

lol ok I didnt get that...plz explain...






~~Mara_Thamizhan

WC to my world Mara!


**Awakening from normal sleep is hard enough. so this awakening must be harder, uh?

LOL hahahaha good one mate! Thanks!





~~Die_Muräne

Hey matey :)


**I'm almost in tears lol

aww no need to cry..be happy that teh Awakening is abt to happen :)


** I had a wow-dream tonight (but I won't tell, smile)

ohhh c'mon out with it..lol...plz tell me...plz plzz plzzzzz....





~~Twisted_Truth

hey doooode...


**Both sacrifice the present. That's why. Romantic aesthism.

A Sacrifice is needed to get to the next phase :)





~~Still_figuring_out

heyy SFO thanks :)


**excuse my short comment, but i don`t think anyting more i say can do justice to this beautifully written post.

aww thats fine...as long as u grasped something out of my writings...muahhhh!





~~Desperado

heyy matey hows u?


**dont knw wht inspired dis..but beautiful words

thanks! The Inspiration for this comes from many experiences in my life...mainly one that I cannot really spill out here...


**you already are..just believe in it.

thanks :) that was sweet...





~~Jeevan

heyyy Jeevan hows ya? Back for more hai na? Goood :)

**very Beautiful sleep Keshi. My skin so white... and the as sleeping plants get life is lovely.:)

U like those parts? Me too...an Awakenig is amazing isnt it...so serene and so beautiful and so magical when it happens...





~~PRADEEP K.

heyy mate!


**Very meditative. Forgive the expression, but it is so very close to what I call the Chasmic consciousness.

really? That's a very interesting view of this post...tell me more abt Chasmic consciousness...Im bad in those areas..lol!


**This is a masterpiece, Keshi!
(Humble Salutations)

oh c'mon not so much of a masterpiece :):)





~~Kannan_Uayarajan

helloooo Kannan!

**ok ..ok..so you are not yet reborn...just dead as of now...

could be..lol!


**Why such a topic..?What 's the motivation?

Good Q...:) Motivation comes from an experience in my life...it's hard for me to tell u that now...but yeah, I can very much relate that situation to this post...just think of it as someone who 'died' too early...someone who wanted to 'live' but didnt get a chance to...and that someone wished to be 'awakened'...it could be 'someone' or 'something' :) Use ur imagination...





~~Wallycrawler

heyyya Wally!

**It's unanimous ! Everyone loves you and your poetry .

aww thats a very sweet thing to say Wally...we love u too :) atleast I do hehehehe...


**Why do they hate me so much ? What am I chopped liver or som'thin ?

lollllz na man...ur too good and no one hates ya...who said this? HUGGGGGGGGZ! see I love ya :)





~~SaffronSaris

Hey Saffy!


**Keshi being poetic and dreamy mmmmmm

hehe yess...Im often in that state..:):)





~~Sudeep

heyyy Suddzz hows ya?


**u remember I had said last yr tht I m gonna be an enlightened person after reading ur blogs... :))

lol u did say that...ok so now ur Pope Sudzz VIII? :):)


**waiting for my rebirth (hope so in Australia) ;)

aww and I was waiting to be born in India..quick, hope for India now lol!





~~Neha

heyyy Neha WC to my blog!

And thanks :)





~~Trée

heyyy sweet Tre hows ya? Came Down Under to see me? awww....


**Are we not all born anew with each and every moment?

Spot on!


**Die to the past, hold the future at bay, and bath in the present moment.

U have an AWESOME view of this...WOW Tre! Death of yday...life of today...birth of tomorrow...brilliant thinking!


**Oh, and don't ever color your hair. I like it just the way it is. :-)

lol ok where did that come from now?





~~Niki_Bakshi

heyyy Bakshi chick hows ya?


**but i feel pain & sadness in this post.

U got that right...pain is always ard with the death of something...but there's always a rebirth...isnt there?


**ru okay keshi-chan?? (^o^;;;

Thanks sweety, Im fine...fine as I should be :)





~~-Poison-

heyy Toxic dude ;-)


**a new beginning. i wonder if u let go of the unfinished deeds and the scarred hearts when u rise from the ashes of ur older self. or would it be sweet amnesia. a chance to taste the world all over again. be it bitter, bland or sweet, or as usual a combination of all, in proportions we can never imagine.


Great thoughts and a beautiful view!
Lets say coming back to 'life'...from the 'dead'...for the soul is immortal...another view...hehehe...


**i am easily persuaded by good negotiators

lol r ya? well let me negotiate something with ya then...is there any chance u wud blog again w.o. going into so many breaks? :):)





~~Jigal

Hey Jigggzy hows ya? And thanks :)


**another journey, another awakening....aahaa.... Kya bat hai!!!

koi baat nahin...:):) My hindi sucks I know...




~~Miranda

heyy Miranda long time! WOW so good to see u again...hugggggggz n thanks dear!





~~Fuzzbox

Look who's here...the one and only Fuzzy master ;-)

Thanks for the encouragement matey!





~~Sujit

heyyy Sujit :)


**what to be another keshi again .. rekindling your rebirth ??

perhaps :) But I dun think I wanna be Keshi again...hehe...




~~Anup.777

Anuuuuuuuup...miss ya...





~~Mind_Curry

WC MindCurry!


**all the` worlds a stage huh?


It SURE IS!


**whats keshi btw? is it your name? what does it mean?

Keshi is short for Keshini...my online name...which means 'Woman with beautiful hair' in Sanskrit :)





~~Jackal

heyyy dude hows ya? And thanks :)





~~Tarun

heyyy Tarun :)

**Wake-up girl.....very nice write-up

I so wanna continue sleeping...hehehe...






~~Sittingnut

heyyyyyyyyy :)


**is it merely a creative exercise? or is it an expression of some sort of rebirth in yourself?

It's both :)


**you certainly will be :-)

I hope so...hehehe...






~~Phoenix


heyyy hows u Phoenix?


**Great writing. I feel very relaxed now. I think I will take a nap.

and be in a state of 'phoenix' in few hrs ha ;-)



Keshi.

saby said...

, when u r feeling low
remember to Keep your faith in all beautiful things;
, in the sun when it is hidden, in the Spring when it is gone.
-Roy R. Gilson
Quote WorldFamous Quotes at QuoteWorld.org

Dawn....सेहर said...

Hey dear...hv u ever tried writing poetry...I guess U shd continue if u did :)
amazing juggle of words there...smoothering and relishing I wud say :)

keep writing...

cheers

Keshi said...

~~Saby

Thanks that was a very heartfelt quote...




~~Dawn

nopezz...no poetry writing skills as such...:) just mental jargon of my twsited soul...hehehe..

Hows u Dawn?


Keshi.

tulipspeaks said...

i guess the interpretation of this post is up to the one reading it..

i see it from my point of view and can't agree more how much it relates to me..

this one should go to one of top 10 post, just like what rohit said..


haven't read the mail u send.. my office server blocked hotmail..so, will check it out when i got back home..

hugss

=am000nie=

southpaw said...

What are we talking about here,you, life or the spring? Pls enlighten me, i m lost.. i m lost...

:P fuzzbox said...

I love this piece every time that I read it. You have truly awakened. Great, Great post my friend!

niki yokota said...

hi keshi-bambichan!
yeah i believe rebirth, reincarnation thingy!
great thought indeed(^o^)/
many thanks for taking time for comment reply!!
have a good day!!!!

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

when i came here yest , there were only 14 posts , but i couldnt comment as my IE wouldnt let me do so ...

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

hi keshi dear ,
ur words sound like GNR or Linkin Park ....
I will rise up from the ashes, : just like a phoenix !!!
We all do that , right ? but many a time , we dont realise that .... cheerio !!!!
keep smiling gurrrrlll ....

btw , will u be coming down to india sometime ?

ishita said...

this is so beautiful...i came back here twice to read this...::-)

been here before...never got round to leaving a comment:)...i think that had more to do wid the fact that i'd be scrollingg...reading everyone's comments....!! and reading...and reading:)...**sigh**...

But i luvd this...had to get down to writing a comment and tellin u this...!!!!

Jewel Rays said...

Hey keshi just came to say you are a lovely person. :) and hey beautiful keep that spirit soaring. i dun know why but i missed ya somehow.

anup.777 said...

I missed u soooo much too !! .... the days seem tooo long if I've not had one of these morning comments session with you buddy! ... :) lol

~*. D E E P A .* ~ said...

hello ??

Prmod Bafna said...

Truly beautiful writing! Wonder what drives you! lovely post!!

PuNeEt said...

very beautifully expressed...
wish u all the best...

:-))

Cheers

Autumn Storm said...

Awesome piece of writing, Kesh!

lil _kath said...

...reborn??rebirth?or whatever ,is a good thing...that's the time when we need to change something in our life to be a better person,and to have the very best for us...awakening yeah!!
Good read here always..keep it up sweetie!
Godbless.

hugs,
-kathy-

saby said...

how i hate alee

, Oh God how i hate alee,

rebel_on_loose said...

Whoa that ws sum powerful display of ur creative talent Keshi!!
Way 2 Go !!
:))

Michelle said...

that was beautifully written kesh!!!

Anonymous said...

that was beautifully written kesh!!!

Dewaker Basnet said...

58th person to post a comment..shame on me;) someday ill be the first one..well will try to..
beautifully written:)

Nitika said...

May be its about the infant who was enjoying life in the mother womb but got killed before opening eyes in this beautiful world....and that soul again hope to breath in another womb and wish to get the existence in this world like us... Overall it’s about the hope one carries...wish one desire to fulfill...it’s the optimistic feeling each time we fall.....

Honestly speaking I read it 3 times...and I’m willing to read again....U r truly amazing writer..u portrayed almost everything in one para n its damm meaningful as usual..... too good sweetheart...I can’t wait to give u a big..Muahhhhhzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz n Hugzzzzz

take care
luv

burf said...

thats leitatia casta, hot as hell, right?

Varkey said...

nice post

afterlife ....rebirth ..... some of the true mysteries....

if i am reborn .... what will i be? who wll i be? do i have a choice as to wat i want to be ? more musteries ...eh!!

arbit said...

Nice..

Dalicia said...

dearest keshi, greetings from PRAGUE! thank you for the lovely message..well send some EURO hunks to you! ahahha

Fernando said...

i had to stick my nose in here, somehow ;-)

lovin' your blog, keshi. first visit (of many more to come) here.

eh

coolvir said...

Waoh...
For me Your this post not only signifies rebirth of body but also a mind....

Really nicely written

Łóòň Ġãĺ said...

Beautiful :)

luvwannabefree25 said...

I love that song... wow... great music... you rule...

Mayimakeyousmile said...

Hi Keshi - the speech from your hand as the music lingered in the back ground touched my heart and inspired my yearn of thought. Truly , beautifully astounding.

Manish said...

Wow.. that was just wonderful...
It was one of the best piece of writings I came accross the past few days... it was scintillating among the rest...
u just touched the emotions that we have deep within... n more... hats off to you...
still am at a loss of words for this piece..
keep it up...
keep smilin...
god bless you
Manish

MS said...

Hey Keshi!!

That was one masterpiece to say the least.....How beautifully written about the blissful soul/spirit.

Somehow, I feel all these souls of ours would have known each other in our earlier births also....thatz y v r able to share our feelings N emotions with each other so well.....U took that seriously.....U better do!! Hey I really feel so :)

Cheers!!
MS

Pri said...

know this feelin...it was almost like de ja vu...:)
wonderful writeup...could relate to every word...u rock!!

Dewdrop said...

I've never seen you sound this intense. Signifies a new beginning. Im sure you will survive all the odds, cos you are determined and very much loved. I hope you doing well...Good luck

Keshi said...

~~Amutha

Huggggggz sweety!

**i guess the interpretation of this post is up to the one reading it..

thats right :) andI think u know exactly what I mean.

thanks for always being there for me Amu...I wont forget that ever.





~~Southpaw

heyy mate!


&&What are we talking about here,you, life or the spring?

whatever u want it to be South :) What d u see it as? Awkening of....?




~~:P fuzzbox

kiss my ### Fuzzy lol! Hows ur break going?


**I love this piece every time that I read it. You have truly awakened.

thanks matey! :)





~~Niki_Bakshi

heyyy Bakshi chan :)


**believe rebirth, reincarnation thingy!

Most Buddhists do...r u a Buddhist?
btw rebirth can be of anything...life, soul, mind, hope, courage, strength etc...




~~Deepa

heyy Deepzz :)

March 03, 2006 2:42 PM


**ur words sound like GNR or Linkin Park ....

oh does it? hmmm is it any wonder I listen to them most of the time...hehehe..


**We all do that , right ? but many a time , we dont realise that ....

thats true...w.o. realising we go thru so many awakenings in life...well-said girl!


**btw , will u be coming down to india sometime ?

I know not that right now..but it wud be just great to be in India for a long break...one of my dreams that I so hope will come true...




~~Ishita

Heyyy Ish WC to my world!


**this is so beautiful...i came back here twice to read this...::-)

aww thanks :)


**i think that had more to do wid the fact that i'd be scrollingg...reading everyone's comments....!! and reading...and reading:)...**sigh**...

lol yeah my comment section often becomes discussion session :)


**But i luvd this...had to get down to writing a comment and tellin u this...!!!!

thanks very much Ish, I really appreciate that!

U urself have a great blog...love ur pics...u look great! And that poem...WOW got me very emoional...





~~Jewel_Rays

hyeyy Amy hows ya?


**Hey keshi just came to say you are a lovely person. :) and hey beautiful keep that spirit soaring. i dun know why but i missed ya somehow.

aww hugggggggz what a sweet babe! U really did miss me? wow that's a high for me ;-)





~~Anup.777

Anuuuuuuupppp!


**I missed u soooo much too !! .... the days seem tooo long if I've not had one of these morning comments session with you buddy! ... :) lol

lol all of us here r becoming quite close now ha..what a great bond we have now. Like someone said here Im sure we all wud have met somewhere b4 in a previous birth in another era...huggggggggggggggz Anup, hope ur having a great 'relaxed' weekend ;-)





~~xFreaKx

heyy WB!


**Truly beautiful writing! Wonder what drives you! lovely post!!

Alot of my life experiences is my drive I believe...thanks mate!





~~Puneet

Pu bear hows ya? Thanks :)





~~Autumn_Storm

heyy girl thanks for dropping by!





~~Lil _kath

heyy Kathzz hows ya?


**...reborn??rebirth?or whatever ,is a good thing...

it sure is good to 'awaken' :)


**that's the time when we need to change something in our life to be a better person,and to have the very best for us...

Spot on girl! That's the chance to correct old mistakes and learn to be better than last time...

Huggggggz Kath!





~~Saby

Saby hows ya? So quiet these days...?? Now why d u hate Aaelee? hehehehe...





~~Rebel_on_loose

Rebbbz hows ya? Thanks for the encouragement :)




~~Michelle

heyyy Mich long time huggggggggggz!




~~Anonymous

heyyy Anon dude, thanks :)





~~Dewaker_Basnet

heyy WB :)


**58th person to post a comment..shame on me;)

no shame, no game :) so ur fine lol!

Thanks mate!





~~Nitika

Nitiiiiiiiiiii hows u been? LONG TIME! I came back from my holz in NZ n u were gone on a break :( R u back for good? Missed ur presence so much!


**May be its about the infant who was enjoying life in the mother womb but got killed before opening eyes in this beautiful world....

very beautiful interpretation...wow!


**and that soul again hope to breath in another womb and wish to get the existence in this world like us...

yeah...thats one way to see it as...great thinking!


**Overall it’s about the hope one carries...wish one desire to fulfill...it’s the optimistic feeling each time we fall.....

Spot on! Hope is all we have..and the only thing that awakens each time...smart girl :)


**Honestly speaking I read it 3 times...and I’m willing to read again....

aww thanks and good interpretation girl wow! and muahhhhhhhhhhhhhz!





~~Burf

WC Burf!


**thats leitatia casta, hot as hell, right?

I think so...Hot as hell even when she's sleeping...hehehehe...




~~Varkey

Varkey thanks!


**afterlife ....rebirth ..... some of the true mysteries....

sure is ha...


**if i am reborn .... what will i be? who wll i be? do i have a choice as to wat i want to be ? more musteries ...eh!!

thats somethign I wanna know too...but guess we'll never know cos dead men dun tell stories na...:(




~~Karthik

WC to my world Karthik! and thanks :)





~~Elaine

Elainnnnnnnnnnnnnnnne! OMG ur writing to me from Prague? WOW wanna bethere with right now :) lol to see all the European heart-throbs ;-) I thought u said ur on some religious retreat lol!


**well send some EURO hunks to you! ahahha

well I dun mind picking em up..lolllz send em now! Besides Anup wont be so J na...;-)

When r u coming back? Miss ya tonz girl!





~~EH

WC to my blog EH!

**i had to stick my nose in here, somehow ;-)

Im glad u did :)


**lovin' your blog, keshi. first visit (of many more to come) here.

aww thanks :) ur most WC here anytime!





~~Coolvir

heyyy hows u and ur guitar? :)


**For me Your this post not only signifies rebirth of body but also a mind....

Spot on! Rebirth of a lost mind...a lost soul...whatever u see it as...

Thanks mate!





~~Cheesy_Termite

helllo Cheesy hows it going?

And thanks girl!





~~Luvwannabefree25

heyy WB matey!


**I love that song... wow... great music... you rule...

yep Evanescence roxxx :) Glad u like the music here...




~~Mayimakeyousmile

heyy MayImakeusmile :) U just did..hehehehe...


**the speech from your hand as the music lingered in the back ground touched my heart and inspired my yearn of thought.

My Immortal suits thi spost ha...glad u realised that and could find a connection between the 2...well done!




~~Manish

heyyy WB Manish :)


**it was scintillating among the rest..u just touched the emotions that we have deep within

Im so glad I did :) and thanks!





~~MS

MS hows ya?


**How beautifully written about the blissful soul/spirit.

thanks :)


**Somehow, I feel all these souls of ours would have known each other in our earlier births also....thatz y v r able to share our feelings N emotions with each other so well.....

Ur right...there must have been some deep connection among all of us here...cos we u'stand each other so well..and sometimes ppl who r close to u in real dun ustand u...but all of us here do...so there must be some long lost connections...


**U took that seriously.....U better do!! Hey I really feel so :)

:) I do too...no doubt abt that MS!
Thanks!





~~Pri

heyyy Pri WC to my world!


**know this feelin...it was almost like de ja vu...:)

aha it sure ia ha...

Thanks for the encouragement!





~~Dewdrop

Dewdyy doooo :) hows ya?


**I've never seen you sound this intense. Signifies a new beginning.

yes...fresh beginnings after stale existences...


**Im sure you will survive all the odds, cos you are determined and very much loved. I hope you doing well...Good luck

aww thanks Dewdy...somehow u read my mind so well....






Thanks all...some beautiful thoughts and strong energies from all of ur words...luv u guys!

And dun forget to awaken urselves...

Keshi.

southpaw said...

Well as of now u seem to be have woken up, life i guess was always there and spring, i guess we still hv time.

Gangadhar said...

dat's a nice write up,Keshi dear..
Amazing!!

the_ego_has_landed said...

Awesome!!:) "'twas too short, too good, too frightening, too lost, too quick. A bright flash once and a faded memory I've become." lovely lines...hope u r in peace now..and ur/our journey has been potrayed really well!

cheers! nice post!:)

MuseMan1 said...

"Riddles"

She speaks in riddles,
sometimes blue
and leaves me wondering
what to do
for once a shining vision, now
a rusty mothballed one somehow
still calls me near
with swanton song
and makes me wonder just how long
Until this earth-suit
cloaked with rain
shall set me free from sin and pain
and all my trials on earth be done & then shalt live with God's own Son

Wow, Amazing poetry Keshina, couldn't resist throwing my own two cents in, (even though I'm a few days late!) Saw your blog due to a search for that Mary Mary song lyric "take the shackles off my feet so i can dance," and yes, I do love to dance! Working on setting up my own poetry-based website and would like to mutually link when I do... drop me a line anytime!!! jonathan seeknhiswill@yahoo.com

MuseMan1 said...

"Riddles"

She speaks in riddles,
sometimes blue
and leaves me wondering
what to do
for once a shining vision, now
a rusty mothballed one somehow
still calls me near
with swanton song
and makes me wonder just how long
Until this earth-suit
cloaked with rain
shall set me free from sin and pain
and all my trials on earth be done & then shalt live with God's own Son

Wow, Amazing poetry Keshina, couldn't resist throwing my own two cents in, (even though I'm a few days late!) Saw your blog due to a search for that Mary Mary song lyric "take the shackles off my feet so i can dance," and yes, I do love to dance! Working on setting up my own poetry-based website and would like to mutually link when I do... drop me a line anytime!!! jonathan seeknhiswill@yahoo.com

Rohit Talwar said...

Sure, girl. That's the spirit!

I've not been around, and here I see a LOT of posts I missed!

Maya Cassis said...

like your name,keshi.Lovely post on rebirth.

anup.777 said...

hiya Keshi ...
yup we're all getting so close ... and so fast ... its really great!!!

I had quite a relaxed weekend ... got in a bit of studying done too ... am gradually increasing the pace for the exams which are in the first week of May.

Hope u had a great weekend ... and wish u have a great week too ... :)

Ajay said...

this is awesom buddy...

Contented said...

No.of comments already tells how beautiful the post was. I think Not only this, all your posts has something to say and inspire. I will keep passing by...=)

Trée said...

Just checking in to see how my angel is doing. I'm going thru Keshi withdrawals. :-)

kkalpz said...

fantabulous kesh!!!....thats a combo of fantastic n fabulous..:)
Ever thought of writing a book??...am sure it'll sell like hawt cakes
love ya.

Keshi said...

~~Southpaw

heyy Southy how ya?


**Well as of now u seem to be have woken up, life i guess was always there and spring, i guess we still hv time.

Spring comes every now n then...so r awakenings...thanks mate!





~~Gangadhar

heyy Gangzz thanks :)





~~The_ego_has_landed

heyy Ego WB! :)


**hope u r in peace now..and ur/our journey has been potrayed really well!

Peace...interesting thought...
Thanks for the encouragement...





~~MuseMan1

**"Riddles"

Lovely....good one mate and WC! Will keep in touch...thanks!






~~Rohit_Talwar

Rohittttttt where u been? I was so worried...wussup dude??? SO good to see u here again...





~~Maya_Cassis

WC to my world Maya!

And thanks :)





~~Anup.777

Anuppppppppp the sweet n sensible guy :) hugggggggz!

aww thanks for the wishes for this week...I badly need it lol! Cos I have some silly meeting today - a new project :)
Thats great u had a relaxing weekend..and yes we r all getting too close too fast..hehehe...good to have so much love n support from all over the world isnt it!





~~Ajay

Thanks Ajay :)





~~Contented

heyyy Contented WC to my blog!


**I think Not only this, all your posts has something to say and inspire. I will keep passing by...=)

Thanks for the encouragement...:)





~~Trée

Tre whoaaaaaa :):) hows ya?


**I'm going thru Keshi withdrawals. :-)

lol why is that?





~~Kkalpz

thanks...




Keshi.

luvwannabefree25 said...

Keshi,

I love what everything that you write as does a lot of other people. Thanks for visiting my site and for the very kind words.
;)

ArChaNa said...

its is beautiful!
inspiration?? Pheonix??

anup.777 said...

absolutely ... its amazing how this has happened ... u reach out ... hardly expecting anyone to reach back (being the pessimist that one often is) ... and then u get {{HUGS}} ... and u r so plesantly suprised ... lolz ... :)

All da best for ur presentation buddy! :)

I've a deadline to meet too ... so, will answer ur comment on ma blog later ok buddy? ... c ya!

Keshi said...

~~luvwannabefree25

heyy mate thanks :) u too!





~~Archie

thanks girl....yep it could be anything that u imagine will be awakened...:)
Inspiration is another beautiful view of it, thanks!






~~Anup.777

heyy Anup hugggggggggz! :) Good luck with ur deadline too! I will catch up with u soon...tata!



Keshi.

Het Waghela said...

"As the sleeping plant gets life with a sprinkle of rain, as new leaves sprout when Spring arrives..."

Wow! that was a gem Keshi,,, that was a gem.

Keshi said...

Thanks Het...btw ur the 100th commentor - congratts! :)

Keshi.

susubala said...

Wow....beautiful post from keshi girl ! But why this pain !

Keshi said...

~~Susubala

thanks dear!


**But why this pain

I cant ans that directly...cos Pain is all I've known...and it has now become my life partner.


Keshi.