Thursday, September 14

Room 367

Arrived at the hotel. She has a great smile. Hello how may I help you sir? You're in room 367 and here are the keys, enjoy your stay sir. Took the lift upstairs. A room quite pleasant. Hello reception I need help, my doors don't open and I'm locked inside! Hello Hello is anyone there? No one on the other side of the phone. Looking outside the window. Giant wild trees in darkness wanting to bury the loneliness, swaying to the breeze. Raindrops fall and they seem to hum a sad story of a long lost girl. A creaking sound of a door opening. I suddenly notice a side-door that leads to the balcony. Through the half-opened door I see a young girl in the balcony standing and staring into the deep night. Long black hair that reached her hips. Eyes that spoke volumes with tears dancing. Hands slender and pale. Wearing a white veil but jeans on. She seems to be in despair. Holding a letter in her hands. Suddenly she turns towards my way. Comes running to the door with her arms stretching out towards me! I shut the door so hard. Trapped inside in sheer terror. Who is she. I look again through the keyhole. Yes she is that same stewardess! The beauty who lead me here and trapped me in? What is she doing here. I shiver in fear. I open the bedside drawer. A newspaper article that reads 'Permanent Guest In Room 367'. I faint in shock. Wake up in about 2mins. And she's sitting on my bed! I run to the door. She laughs so loud. I try to open the door and it finally opens. I go down the corridor and reach the lifts. The lift doors opens and she is in there making loud sobs! I run back to the stairs and arrive at the desk somehow. Thank God, I wanna go home now. The same stewardess is there again?? She looks up and says with a smile 'I'm sorry sir checking out is prohibited - you can never leave'.

Guys this is just a short story I wrote partly using a real story that happened in a haunted hotel in Queensland. A chambermaid who committed suicide (out of a lost love) seems to haunt that hotel and seems to want to mingle with the guests. I don't know how true it is, but alot of people have seen her and was a pretty famous story. Apparently she's still around. Anyways I never really believed in ghosts until I really saw one in an apartment I once rented. I have blogged about it before, if interested read here. Any spooky stories to share?

Concert Update: With all your words of great encouragement and my $80 that should not be wasted at all (considering that so many kids are hungry in Ethiopia), I'm going to the concert, yes! Thanks guys for the advice MWAH! It's on tomorrow night and it's a combination of Salsa and Rock n Roll music with dinner and dance. I'm going to dance alright...to forget alot of things in my life. Yes I'm going to have fun and I will make sure I wear the sexiest outfit tomorrow...my black halter-neck top and long black skirt. This little go-getter kitten is close to what my spirits will be like tomorrow - it's raining men, hallelujah!

Now check out this LIVE version of one of my fav songs ever. Hotel California. It also kind of goes with my post so here it is. And hey have a good one folks!

Current Music: Hotel California by Eagles

111 Cranium Signets:

southpaw said...

:) Nice story...
I never miss out an opprotunity to see haunted places, there is a unique charm abt such places...

my black halter-neck top and long black skirt.****Droooooooooooools

Have a great great weekend and keep us posted abt the number of casualty.....lols

samuru999 said...

Wow Keshi!
You can write so well!
I really liked that short story you wrote!
Spooky though!
I do not have any spooky stories to share!

Dancing Queen... you have as absolute ball tomorrow night!
You will be the prettiest, sexiest
girl in the whole joint!
(and, I get to dog-sit all weekend
I do love dogs, but I would prefer
to be there with you tomorrow
night dancing the night away
if you think of it.. do a
dance for me.)

Love this song too!
Have a wonderful weekend Keshi!
You have been sad the last few...
so, on this one just be totally
happy!
Forget all your cares!

Huggggz my dear Keshi!

-Margie

saby said...

Brrrrrrrr

saby said...

Compared to what we ought to be, we are only half awake. We are making use of only a small part of our physical and mental resources.

Stating the thing broadly, the human individual thus lives far within his limits. He possesses power of various sorts which he habitually fails to use.



William James

(1842-1910, author)

saby said...

The Booker prize
if dis is not plagiarized shit

priya said...

Why do u wanna scare me when I am alone:-))) Just kidding... Did you have any real experiences keshi..

I love that kitty. Beyonce is coming up here too. I am yet to decide if I have to go.

saby said...

Girl it is on, at four o' clock in di morn'
An I been watchin' you shake dat ting
Man dem a try, dem a get deny
Caw I'm gonna tek dat ting
Girl it is mine, a long time me a line
An pan we fi waan you to shake dat ting
Gyal dem a round an
Dem a try tek yuh crown
A nuff a dem just, ain't nothing

[Verse]
Dat ting a weh yuh got dey
Weh yuh get it from, a mus yuh mama
Do you fault dey, from me like a champion a bubble pon di
Chart dey, gyal a look yuh hav me
A we waan to slap dey from di front an to di back dey
From di bed an to di matinee,
We haffi blow, pull out di guns an pop pop
It's dey fault dey, energy dey dey a so dey gimme di buff
An look pon me, baby put it on me
Right a now yuh mek di Dutty dap a feel horny

[Chorus]
Girl it is on, at four o' clock in di morn'
An I been watchin' you shake dat ting
Man dem a try, dem a get deny
Caw I'm gonna tek dat ting
Girl it is mine, a long time me a line
An pan we fi waan you to shake dat ting
Gyal dem a round an
Dem a try tek yuh crown
A nuff a dem just, ain't nothing

saby said...

Keshieeeeeeeeeee

Girl dont ever marry
u belong to all


but do have children with a man with good genes

Johnny B. Good said...

When I wake up in the mornin' light
I pull on my jeans and I feel all right
I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on
I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on hello

It's the weekend, and I know that you're free hello
So pull on your jeans and come on out with me hello
Oh 'cause I need to have you near me,
I need to feel you close to me
I need to have you near me, I need to feel you close to me hello

You and me, we'll go motorbike ridin' in the sun
And the wind and the rain
I got money in my pocket, I got a tiger in my tank
And I'm king of the road again

I'll meet ya in the usual place
You don't need a thing except your pretty face, alright
I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on
I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on
Aw, here we go mama

You and me, we'll go motorbike ridin' in the sun
And the wind and the rain
I got money in my pocket, I got a tiger in my tank
And I'm king of the road again

When I wake up in the mornin' light
I pull on my jeans and I feel all right
Hey I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on

I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on
I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on
I pull my blue jeans on, I pull my old blue jeans on



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ari4u said...

Wow.. well written :-)
I had goosebumps on my neck!
You should have acted in Sixth Sense :D

Phew.. so you finally decided to go to the concert. I knew you would :p Go get em girl :) All the men are out there.... and dont come back along :)
LOL. Take care and enjoy the concert.
air hugs to you....
-ari

Johnny B. Good said...

Ori



u been outclassed
hehehehehe

ari4u said...

Correction.
*dont come back alone :)

Cazzie!!! said...

I have plenty of stories, all ghostly in fact. From the days of working in a nursing home that is situated in a 3 tiered mansion from the early 1900's...to the hospitalk I work in when buzzers go off at the desk and when we get there the patient is asleep!!
HAve a great time when you go out, I can't wait to get into nice sexy things when my weight is all gone..a few months time I estimate.
That song is one of my favourites of all time...for sure :)

SCRIBBLEZ TO WAKEUP said...

"Wearing a white veil but jeans on" is hillarious in between the haunted or wht ever place...Hahah...Nice story lady..All the best for the nite...Guess I am late for tht :)

saby said...

Cazzie!!!


u drive dis old man Crazyyy

Sujit said...

nice story :).... wow good.. so are going to make to party!.. dance as if you will never dance again :)...

s0ulasylum said...

wow tht reeked spook... *shudder* .. i always hate watching these little girl/boy horror movies.. they just seem so real..
and hey am happy ur goin to tht concert... outfit sounds super hot.. hope ur accessorising it with super long earrings.. hehe i have a earring fetish amongst many others.. :) and shoessssss of course.. i'd give my life for a well deserved pair!! lol.. okok.. well look ur best .. the band can step aside coz ur going to be the rockstaaaa!! :))

Parag said...

Even though I left school 25 yrs ago.. I still get "nightmares" of being late to school / a difficult mathematics paper !!
I am usually not the "fear of unknown" types..

Tarun said...

I beleive in ghost and I have seen real spooky life of 2 years of such hoorible things which I don't want to remind myself et al.

Seema said...

Whoaaaa that was some fiction...enjoyed it each bit!!
Heyyy chilll out for the nite...have fun n enjoiiii...life is great!
Love tis song!

alias Fleiger said...

Let's go stepwise here...

The story, spooky. Reading the extended blog post now... Haven't seen any ghosts yet (they seem to share humanity's fear of me), but got some spooky experiences to share.

A ghost at hotel reminds me of "The Shining" by Stephen King. Have you read it?

Next in line, concert? Good decision... Enjoy the concert.

But I was thinking you would go for belly dance instead of salsa ;)

And Nikichan's going to be very angry now...

AnonymousBlogger said...

Keshi, you're such a great writer! Maybe you'll share some more with us. You will right?

Enjoy the concert. Enjoy the food.

Rock the skirt. Find a guy. Dance. Have a great evening.

Jewel Rays said...

Ghosts!

I was going home with a friend two nights back with a friend and he saw me walking through this part of the place where he worked and asked why did i go there. it was dark and he started tellin me creepy tales. its freaked out cause i was at the zone where the ghost dwelled supposedly. and he went on with ghost tales all through the night. abit freaky ya...LOL..but i told him in the end i hear alot but i dun see one. maybe felt one ..but see...>> i am not sure..

and heyz...enjoy the concert...Sure it would be FUN!!

HAPPY WEEKEND to dA Lovely one! *hugs!

Kautilya said...

The biggest proof of ghosts do exist is me! hahaha.

They r just torubled spirits present in a different dimensions.. and ppl do see them coz.. they have trouble to let go what they have already lost! Their life! The do become visible when the try to come back to this dimension, because they have trouble in letting it go!

Mehak said...

Ohh man what a scary story.....

Let me read about your meeting with the ghosts.

& have a nice time dancing...drooling :P ...eating @ the concert...

Hotel Cal is an all time fav...

uttara said...

bhooooooooooooo
hehe its so spooky... i can give ur name to Ramsay he needs some good spooky writer

n i wanna know how many guys fainted looking at ya in that sexyyy outfit..:D

hey thats my FAVVVVVVVVVVV no.

Hotel California.. wooo hooo :D

muahhhh

Pallavi said...

Oh I love dancin! Have a blast and dance like no one is watching..

Yashita said...

my god! not ghost stories! pliss! hehee...I sleep alone u see! yea, I believe that ghosts and spirits do exist...about my exp...hmn, not that I ahve seen anything or encountered any apparition as such...but I still feel like they are all around us! okay, that is it! I am not talkin about ghosts any more!

and yo girl! that's the spirit! go put on the sexiest dress and knock those guys out!:) heheh...I was supposed to attend my frnds salsa competition but I couldn't go coz of the fever nd all!but then I was so regrettin!:( I am glad u are goin!!
and hotel california is one of my fav too:)

WhatEver You're said...

Cool Keshi.... Hotel California this song is also my FAV song man... cool... nice song indeed...
whenever i hear this song i always imagine myself driving a car along those america's highway road... as those road always so long like never ending... haha....

deepsat said...

nows thats something hair raising!!! good story!! and if its for real.. even better!!

hey a good accompanied song - hotel california!!

"you can check out anytime you like, but you can ne'ver leave!"

;-))

GuNs said...

Photo in your "sexiest outfit" awaited by all your blog readers !!

[:-P]Dp put one (or preferrably more) up soon.

-PeAcE
--WiTh
---GuNs

rain said...

hi! the kitten is very cute and inteligent. It can stand.I like kittens too. I think you may not belive what i say but it is true. It up to you you belive a not. Now... i have more than 30 kittens and cat in my house

Nikita said...

Keshi,

I had goose-bumps on reading that!

Have a nice weekend and have a blast.

Take Care.

desperado said...

i was thinking of exactly d same song while reading ur post....n there it was

i love this one by eagles...apart frm obviously desperado ;)

n halter top n skirt....oh boy am i waiting for d pic now....ummmm

*evil grin n thoughts....bad boy desperado*

lol...take care n have a blast dear

Die Muräne said...

You're such a good writer, Keshi! Really enjoyed your story ;)

Of course I believe in ghosts. They are everywhere.

Eclipsed Thoughts said...

Hey KAP...
i do believe in spirits and all... but no encounter as such... i guess the spirits will get a heart-attack when they see me... so i guess they are being on the safe side... lol :P

Enjoy weekend and keep up the spirit.

Ahem... i hope we get some mushy-mushy stories next.... after the rocky concert... *wink*

anonimply said...

another quatre-quatre obsessive?

have a lot of fun but b back b4 8

m

Kath said...

... No ghost story Kesh plss. ;(;( hubby will be out on tour tomorrow, will gonna have sleepless n scary night ;) aww or can u give me e-hunk ghost either hehe... lol!! ^_^

... ** will make sure I wear the sexiest outfit tomorrow...my black halter-neck top and long black skirt. **

whoaa!! we'll wait for the pics. sweetie.... and enjoyy the night ... make everybody crazy w/ ya sexy dance ^_^ lol!!

... u deserve that smile muahhh! take care....

hugss**

Silvara said...

One of the best ghost stories in the world:

A man sat on a night train reading a book of ghost stories. Next to him, an old man saw what he was reading and leant over. "Excuse me sir, but do you believe in ghosts?", he asked. The first man said disdainfully "No!". The old man looked at him seriously. "I do", he said and disappeared.

:P Chilled me to the bones that one

Mr. Maverick said...

Ouch... I feeel spoookeyyy because I get similar story when i listen to hotel california!!!

:)

I am coming to Sydney btw :).

Arun

Akshay said...

Nice story.. scary also. But I have never seen a ghost so no comments if I believe in them or no. But yea being stuck with a ghost is not funny, unless she happens to be Reese Weatherspoon ;). Have fun at the concert.

ANKIT said...

actually had seen a film on the same lines,,,,,

it goes like this......a smoker enters a hotel,,,run by only a single man.......the hotel is strictly a NO SMOKING ZONE.....!

so if any smoker enters the hotel......he can leave the hotel only after he has given his habit of smoking....!

has more in it....>!,,,

very well written post...!

cheers.....keshi...!

ankit,

Syam said...

though I am not a fan of horror movies and stories I liked your narration skills :-)

Ramya said...

You can check out anytime you like, but u can never leave!!
Beautiful !

Ghost Particle said...

well constructed story...u should write a full version...with blood and all. :D

U saw a ghost before! dang! man...now Im scared.

//black dress...im imagining stuff rite now...but it isnt exactly raining women here...sad sad sad.

Have a wonderful great weekend!

Aditi said...

that is a great song...
nice short story had me intrigued .. i dunno wat i would do if i encountered a ghost... will chk out that spooky story ..
havent encountered one yet...
enjoy the concert

coolvir said...

Keshi-The original Stroy Teller....LOLz

Nicely written......got me glued till the end....

And Best of luck for the nite :)

R2K said...

Wild and crazy and scary story!

Homo Escapeons said...

Although I do not believe in GHOSTS...I do believe in the unpredictable power of the human brain...which can easily 'fool' it's owner with hallucinatory mischief.

Sometimes these are instigated pharmacologically (Wo Dude pppphhhhhttt cough cough did you see that?) and sometimes apparitions can arise from that cranial stew of angst, repressed memories and personal phobias, the subconscious.

One cannot discount the power of suggestion, mesmerism and mass hysteria to induce spectres from the darkside...

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!OH!

Even though I don't believe in ghosts I would never EVER stay in a 'haunted' setting because I do not trust my subcon!..or pranksters who were there to ensure a visit from a poltergeist (noisy ghost) NOT FUNNY!

I would need to bring about 10 pair of underwear to make it through 1 night in a haunted hotel.

BOOOOOOOO! AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH..oh not again!!

SamY said...

poetry ... now story writing ... whatz turning u on?

** Anyways I never really believed in ghosts until I really saw one in an apartment I once rented.

I don't @ least as yet ;)

** it's a combination of Salsa and Rock n Roll music with dinner and dance

u missed out keshi on the menu :D

** I will make sure I wear the sexiest outfit tomorrow

wearning nuthing is the sexiest :p

wowzer kitten's gettin groovy :D ... hav a gr8 weekend squirt

Syam said...

have fun in the concert and don't forget to post some pictures with your sexiest outfit :-)

amitsinha said...

hey keshi , I never thought as a story. looked so real. came back old haunted adventorous trips that i had made.
hey nice ur goin in the concert.
do write smthin abt it in ur next post. and may be sm more stories from ur side.

journeyman said...

very nice blog... it relaxed me... u write very well...
take care and have a great dancing weekend ahead..

journeyman said...

a very nice blog... it relaxed me... nice to know u.. have a great weekend and keep on writing the same way..

tc

journeyman said...

hey sorry for multiple comments did not realise tht u approve the comments...so wrote the words of appreciation again..

Cocaine Jesus said...

neat short story. you wouldn't remember (FAR too young) but kinda reminds me of EC comics of the 50's with that horror sting in the tail.

Deborah said...

Hmmm...I like this story. Ghost stories always take hold of me. I've seen ghosts and experienced some pretty creepy things in my life, so its good to read other people's stories, too (even if they are sometimes taken from fiction).

Foodie's Hope said...

Keshi, reading your haunted story, for a minute I thought you went to the deep end! Girl! Wat u trying to do to me??!! Phew!! Enough horror in my life as it is, not going to start a new one..

Girl is going to get her groove on!!SWEET!! That's more like it :)Have fun! OOOHHH! Mango cobbler did it!OK blame it on me now!!

Check my blog on next friday, Harry scary will be waiting to scare the heck out of you ;)

La vida Loca said...

I dont really care for haunted type stories..but this one is nice.
enjoy the dancing..:)

LERA said...

oooh! what an eeerie Imagination , started to get a few goosebumps.keshi, your story has a potential to turn into a classic .Any plans of writing a Book...BTW, Have a great Time at the concert...:)

Blessed said...

I do believe in ghosts...I remember as a child in the house where I lived. It was a house built in the early 1800's and I remember in this one bedroom seeing a figure sitting at this little table in the room that my brother slept.
I wasn't fearful.

RefleXtion said...

brrrrrr....have you seen this movie called hostel...if you have'nt....dont!!! Hotel california was my fav....it has been so overplayed now.

niki yokota said...

keshi-chan
halter neck is cho sexy!!! i wish i can see u dancing in that screen on the right hand.. (^o^);;
the haunted hotel was sooo very thrilling.
many thanks and have a happy weekend!!!!

ghee-ghee said...

thats quite a story..

i felt the goosebumps all around me.

spooky,spooky,spooky...

i have some spooky stories,too.
(i better blog it out?)

You wrote it well,Keshi,and its really effective!

btw,i love your background music and its nice that u r gonna go to concert :)

enjoy yourself,babe!

ghee

Hazel Dream said...

hmm sometime its nice to evolve that canine insdie this humanity .
relish the Rain ..
dont get drenched .. men are not easy to get drenched with .

tulipspeaks said...

ennakum peiyikum rombe thooram achi ippo ellam :p

=ammu=

Mumbai Guy said...

Ghost, I believe in them lil'bit but haven't personally encountered them yet ;)

How did your concert go?

anup.777 said...

Hi Keshi ... very well written! ... really spooky!

well, i don't think there are ghosts ... but there are spirits ... so guess thats what you encountered ...

anyways, rather not get into that discussion ... :)

Have a gr8 weekend buddy!!!

angel said...

cool spooky story keshi!
and i love that song you got playing on your page!
i'm glad you're going to the concert.

Tanvi said...

hey keshi..how u doin?

R2K said...

Great song, very much classic rock.

saby said...

i am just an old old man
in love







with young young girls with beeg beeg boobs

Ash said...

Lovely story and great setting!

Strictly for my friends said...

That was really spooky! But I kind of like ghost stories.

Check my blog. You've been tagged.

Pri said...

ewwww...tht was spooky!
n im alone at home...:(
such posts should come wth a warning keshi ...brrr!!!

musings (m000nie) said...

k00kie... oh my my someones partying hard... oh i had a wonderful nite out yest... went dancing too... was real fun.. sigh.. im already missing last nite :p

Jo said...

Interesting story. :-) And hey, Hotel California is my most fav rock song!

Kavi said...

Vivid realism ! Almost thought you were in trouble !

starry nights said...

That was a really nice story you wrote.scared me. I believe there are lost souls walking around.Heard lots of ghost stories.I will write a post some time on a real life experience I had.It is really scary.

White Forest said...

gud one :)
I guess i missed a few gud posts :P

"I'm going to the concert, yes!"

YESs...thaz liek it :D

southpaw said...

How are we doing today...:)

KK said...

Thats a nice story. I love watching and reading horror stories. I dont beleive in ghosts. But the story was very nice. I know I am late. Great post keshi :)

Zombie said...

I caught the word "salsa" somewhere....WOWW...lucky bum you!
hope you had super fun at the concert!

saby said...

heyyyyyyyyy

Keshi
u forgot sumting didnt u ?

Jeevan said...

Don't fear us like this keshi, by telling ghost stories:)) Very nice story, i dont hope their is ghost.

sittingnut said...

heyy mate!

what a scary story!
really spooky if one read it at night as i did .
you should write more stories.

btw never seen a ghost myself. next time you see one ask him or preferably her, to give me a visit. :-)
we have some kind of a need to make ourselves scared don't you think?

will now read the next post.

Keshi said...

~~Southpaw

**there is a unique charm abt such places...

thats so true. Some strange peace and charm...

dun drool lol!







~~Samuru999

**Dancing Queen... you have as absolute ball tomorrow night!

that I did Margie HUGGGGGGGGGZ! See ur lovely energy came and reached me across the miles and I did have a fantastic time...tnxxx babez! But I wish u all were with me too...I really did.







~~Saby

**Girl dont ever marry
u belong to all

lol ok :)








~~Jim


:) Nice.




Keshi.

Keshi said...

~~Ari4u

tnxxx Ari I did have a fantastic time :) but I did come back alone lol!








~~Cazzie

**to the hospitalk I work in when buzzers go off at the desk and when we get there the patient is asleep!!

omg thats freaky!

yep dressing up really lifts the spirits up too. I hope u get to do that soon and dazzle away in style Caz ;-)







~~Scribblez_To_Wakeup

**"Wearing a white veil but jeans on"

LOL yeah :) TY Scribblez!







~~Sujit

**dance as if you will never dance again

hell I did :):) ty Sujit for ur advice n everything HUGGGGGGGZ!


Keshi.

Keshi said...

~~S0ulAsylum

yeah lil girl boy horrors r sooooo scary! Have u seen Child Play?

**i have a earring fetish amongst many others.. :)

OMG I'd die for ear-rings lol!


**the band can step aside coz ur going to be the rockstaaaa!!

hahaha they sure did cos I was on stage :):) tnxxx for that genuine wish sweety - it happened HUGGGGGGZ!








~~Parag

lol @math!

**I am usually not the "fear of unknown" types

hey thats great...Im a bit scared of ghosts...but I guess they can be friendly who knows. Cos Im a friendly girl and I can make friends with anyone :):)







~~Tarun

ur serious Tarun? eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerieeeeeee!!




Keshi.

Keshi said...

~~Seema

tnxxx sweety!







~~Fleiger

**A ghost at hotel reminds me of "The Shining" by Stephen King. Have you read it?

I have!!

Belly-dancing wud be nice...but that wud be a Arabic/Turkish event and I have been to one with my best friend...she's a Turkish girl. So exotic those moves!! Luv it.


I promised Niki that that will be my next post :) Fingers crossed.








~~AnonymousBlogger

Rocked the skirt indeed ;-) tnxxxx matey!


Keshi.

Keshi said...

~~Jewel_Rays

Amyyyyy!

**but i told him in the end i hear alot but i dun see one

hehe...I guess only few ppl see em. ppl who have the 6th sense well-tuned. And its such ppl who turn out to be psychics etc.

tnxxx girl I sure did have loadsa fun!









~~Kautilya

ur a cute ghost then lol!

**They r just torubled spirits present in a different dimensions

I believe in that too. And it's ppl with the 6th sense (extra-sensitive) who can see/feel/hear em. Im a very sensitive person...too sensitive actually. And that explains why I may have seen that ghost that day. Yes, they r troubled souls who cant seem to let go of their past.








~~Mehak

They sang Hotel Calfornia that nite woooohoooo!

tnxxx :)







~~Uttara

lol who's Ramsay?

no one fainted but there were so many dudes dancing ard me...gosh some were a bit annoying cos they were staring...WTH! :):)




Keshi.

Keshi said...

~~Pallavi

I really did dance like no one is watching...I had sooo much fun and I was sooooo free. ty sweety!








~~Yashita

aww Yash ur scared? Im so sorry. Hugggggggz!

btw u know to Salsa? WOWWWWW! Hey they did salsa numbers too on Sat nite.








~~whatever_you're

hey WC!

**whenever i hear this song i always imagine myself driving a car along those america's highway road...

'On a dark desert highway..cool wind in my hair...'

so says it :)








~~Deepsat

aha aha :) ty Deep!








~~Guns

Wish granted in my latest post sir ;-)








~~Rain

WC Rain n ty!


** have more than 30 kittens and cat in my house

LOL really? well its cool :) I had 13 cats n kittens at one stage...and 3 dogs...when I was like 8yrs old.








~~Nikita

:) tnxx Niki huggggggz!








~~Desperado

hey I was listening to Desperado this morning n was thinking of ya...awwww :)

did u choose this Id cos of that song?

ur a bad boy? hell na :):)








~~Die_Murane

have u seen one?







~~Eclipsed_Thoughts

**i guess the spirits will get a heart-attack when they see me

LOL cmon! I guess that female ghost came to see me that day cos she needed some make-up tips :):)

btw no mushy stories but there was one guy giving me looks from across the table...I just had some fun with him LOL!








~~Anonimply

huh be bakk b4 8? lol!








~~Kathy

mwahhhhhhhh! awww dun be scared of ghosts cos the one who's going to be in ur room will be a hunky ghost like u said...rofl! Ghost of Elvis or something ;-)

I had tons of fun Kath but I really was thinking of u, Uttsy, Ish and all my blog friends here...how much fun wud that be!








~~Silvara

**The old man looked at him seriously. "I do", he said and disappeared.

Silvara that really froze me in fear. Goshhhhhhhhh was very scary!!!!



Keshi.

Keshi said...

~~Mr.Maverick

** I get similar story when i listen to hotel california!!!

yes me too!

ur comin to Syd? WHEN??????????








~~Akshay

**being stuck with a ghost is not funny, unless she happens to be Reese Weatherspoon

LOL! Well I dun mind being stuck with Elvis' or Kurt Cobain's ghost ;-)








~~Ankit

ty Ankit :) That story sounds interesting...but how can it be a ghost story?








~~Syam

ty Syam :)








~~Ramya

WC Ramya!

yes u can never leave.....! :)








~~Ghost_Particle

Ghosty!! :)

**blood and all

Somehow I think when a ghost story is associated with blood, it becomes less effective. I dunno why but I feel that way.

aww it's not raining women there? Well what abt snowing women then? :):)








~~Aditi

I just froze when I saw that apparition...I can still rem her so clearly.








~~Coolvir

lol so Im a story-teller? gooood!








~~Alex

:) tnxxx!









~~Homo_escapeons

hey great comment mate ty!

**I do believe in the unpredictable power of the human brain...which can easily 'fool' it's owner with hallucinatory mischief.

ok I agree but how do we even know that it's the brain that's fooling us or that it's really something external?


**sometimes apparitions can arise from that cranial stew of angst, repressed memories and personal phobias, the subconscious.

that can happen yes. but even then is there proof? This is the unknown and we fear to believe in the unknown. And majority of us cant and wont see spirits. But few ppl who have their 6th sense fine-tuned may be able to see em?


**I would never EVER stay in a 'haunted' setting because I do not trust my subcon

yes but whats that fear then? If we r so sure it's our subconscious, wy do we fear?


**I would need to bring about 10 pair of underwear to make it through 1 night in a haunted hotel

LOL hahahaha!








~~Samy

**u missed out keshi on the menu

LOL omg ur a crazy kitten now :):)

Wearing nuttin? LOL where d u think Im going to on Sat nite - the shower?

tnxxx Samy! :):)







~~AmitSinha

ty Amit :)


Keshi.

Keshi said...

~~Journeyman

WC Journeyman n tnxxx! No probs there abt the comment repition :) ty for visiting.








~~Cocaine_Jesus

tnxx mate :)

**reminds me of EC comics of the 50's with that horror sting in the tail.

I wasnt born then :(







~~Deborah

G'day Deb!

** I've seen ghosts and experienced some pretty creepy things in my life,

really??? Tell us na.








~~Foodies'_Hope

lol did I scare ya...SORRY! :):)

**Mango cobbler did it!

indeed! that did it and tnxxx to u HUGGGGGGZ!

Who's Harry?







~~La_Vida_Loca

:) tnxx sweety!







~~Lera

hey tnxx Lera!

no no no book writing...I dun wanna make ppl cry reading my pathetic ghost stories lol!







~~Blessed

** seeing a figure sitting at this little table in the room that my brother slept.

OMG u really saw it? what was is like?







~~Reflextion

**Hostel

nope..Im gonna rent it this weekend...tnxx! :) Na dun worry, I like to watch horror movies...but ofcourse I wont sleep for the next 6 months.








~~Niki_Yokota

mwahhhh Niki babez!

I wanna see u in a halter-neck top...bring it on.








~~Ghee

tnxxx babez mwahhh!

u have a spooky story to share? omg tell us all na.







~~Hazel_Dream

**.. men are not easy to get drenched with .

they r...lol cos they r so easy :):)







~~Amutha

why the distance with Mr.Ghost?







~~Mumbai_Guy

read my latest post na :)



Keshi.

Keshi said...

~~Anup.777

Anup hey how have ya been?

**well, i don't think there are ghosts ... but there are spirits ... so guess thats what you encountered ...

Isnt ghosts the same as spirits? I could be wrong. plz explain.







~~Angel

ty Angel! :)








~~Tanvi

hey Tanvi Im pretty good ty and urself? I left a comment in ur blog yday. I was thrilled to see u here after a long time. Hope all is well with u sweety. TC n hugggggz!







~~Alex

ty Alex :)







~~Saby

so ur basically in love with the boobs..not with the girls.







~~Ash

ty Ash!







~~Strictly_for_my_friends

hey so u tagged me too lol ok ty!








~~Pri

omg I forgot the Warning indeed...so sorry :(








~~Musings

m000nie mwahhhhhhh! Ur a party-gal now ha? COOOL! I want pics!!!







~~Jo

I knew it that u wud like this song :)







~~Kavi

:) tnxxx!







~~Starry_Nights

oye starry I cant wait to read that experience of ur's...plzz put it up soon, ty!







~~White_Forest

tnxx mate :)







~~Southpaw

Im well ty and urself Southy? Sorry this ans is late. I wasnt here yday..too busy.







~~KK

ty KK :):)







~~zombie

Salsa it was and many more...u should have been here Misty!








~~Saby

wut did I forget Saby?







~~Jeevan

lol BOOOOOOOOOOOO Jeevan! :):)







~~Sittingnut

heyyy hows u?


**. next time you see one ask him or preferably her, to give me a visit.

haha ok...well if it's a beautiful woman, I'll send her ur way for sure ;-)



Keshi.

alias Fleiger said...

"The Shining" is too good. So is your ghost story...

A Turkish girl doing belly dance, now that would be one sight to watch.

And finger crossed, touchwood and all that...

Orikinla Osinachi. said...

Sweet Keshi,
I know you are a fine writer and your prose is lucid. You also write with confidence.

"Room 367" would have made it to the best of the selected short stories for the Commonwealth Short Story Competition. The 2,000 pounds and fame would have increased your mileage.

You should write novels.

I have not seen any ghost. And the ghosts must be scared of the light of the aura of God surrrounding me. Evil spirits keep off me. And ghosts are evil spirits.

God bless.

N.B:
I read all your recent posts. But commenting has been difficult due to the poor Internet speed here.

Keshi said...

~~Fleiger

u really think my story is good? :)







~~Orkinla_Osinachi

hey Ori ty! :) But I really dun think I qualify for prize-winning level book-writing hehehe. Im just a bathroom-writer lol!


**Evil spirits keep off me. And ghosts are evil spirits.

u really think all of em r evil? I sometimes think some of em maybe friendly...maybe they want company..even tho Im very scared of em!

ty Ori!



Keshi.

anup.777 said...

hmmm ... by ghosts people generally refer to people who're dead but hang around ... i dont believe in that ... as i subscribe to the theory of one life and then heaven or hell ....

but i do believe that spirits/demons/devils/angels exist - the forces of good and evil ... Anyways, lets not get into that ... its me and my whacky beliefs .. :)

BTW just read ur later posts ... and u r looking gorgeous dear ... no wonder so many guys were floored ... Glad u had a gr8 time!!! :) and do let us know of the progress wid the lucky guy who got ur number ... :)

Anonymous said...

Yes, the story is good... so is your experience. I would like to see a ghost some day, would be interesting.

Keshi said...

~~Anup.777

oh ok Anup :)

That guy didnt even call me yet LOL!







~~Fleiger

**. I would like to see a ghost some day, would be interesting.

In that case I can just come ard at night with my hair out in a white dress...lolz!



Keshi.

Anonymous said...

I will keep coffee ready then ;)

Anyways, a lady in white dress with hair spread out? I wish ghosts would keep up with times... I mean, can't they get a jeans or anything?

Keshi said...

Fleiger here already? cool!

yep this ghost loves coffee and cud u have some blue-berry muffins ready too? :):)

lol @jeans! how abt a ghost in a halter-neck top and a skirt?



Keshi.

dumbdodi said...

Real good story, one more talent of yours Kesh.
I am really scared of ghosts and all.....
I love that song too babes..ummmmmmmmmmah........hope my late visits didn't annoy you :-

Anonymous said...

That would definitely be an improvement in their communication skills with masses.

Blueberry muffins? Sure...

Keshi said...

~~Dumbdodi

awww ur so sweet UMMMMAAAAAAAAAH! :):)

hell na Im not annoyed with u at all...how can I get annoyed with someone as sweet as u r?

tc n huggggggggggggggz!








~~Fleiger

lol ok then :)



Keshi.

Known Stranger said...

would you take my business card - next time you find one - i am seriously want to date with a ghost. female ghost not male one - i dont date with male ghost (heie) only drinks with them

let me know.. i am not making fun of it - just serious i am seriously every night search i can find a ghost - i dont know some how i felt only at nights ghosts come..i want to have a chit chat with ghost. - reading your other story

Keshi said...

lol KS but Im not a ghost...but if I do see one I'll ask her to drop by ur room okkk? :)

Keshi.

Known Stranger said...

i know you are not one. you are a beautiful angel. i know. but if you can tell me how i can see a ghost - it help me a lot. you wont believe - i have done crazy stuff on new moon night, going to grave at night, making some dark rituals - but never happened to meet a ghost.

I seriously want to see the ghost and it doesnt appear to me

Neha said...

Me so fucking scared of stuff like this..though havent seen any ghosts till now, don even have the desire to see one.

Keshi said...

~~KS

just do one thing...dun look for any. :)






~~Neha

hehe ur scaredy cat lol!


Keshi.